Open Poetry #24 |
Younger Woman Older Man |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Younger Woman Older Man She's so young and beautiful. What she see's in me I'll never know. She makes me feel at least ten years younger. My body and spirit are aglow. Our lives will go on. She'll go her way. I'll go mine. It hurts me to know we'll only share brief moments of time. JamesLee December25 2002 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
does it have to be that way? sad, if so. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
honey, i got what you got,bad, in reverse..... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sometimes you only get a few minutes even when you have the same calendar birthdate. Enjoy the time, don't worry about the time. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello James The moments may only be brief but they will become cherished memories for you to keep. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah......I've got happy news for you, James! Sometimes she doesn't leave!! Music Maker is 12 years older than me, and I don't even think about it....when you love somebody, it doesn't matter what their age is. The other thing is, if you worry too much about it, negative things can happen, and you can almost project the person leaving. So, cheer up, and just love her, and she'll stay because she loves you! Pen how you truly feel... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Nicely put. I understand and I say don't lament it now enjoy it while you can |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gary tells me all he time that "age is just a number".........After almost 5 years of us being in love, I'm beginning to believe him........ It's the "in love" that makes the age-difference just disappear....I know... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
If you both are happy, why not? Enjoyed reading |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Souls unite through time and space...the distances melt in the afterglow. ThisDiamond |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
i was in love with a man 12 years older than me, i still care about him and think about him at times. probably more than i should. yes, age is just a number. |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Very well written, all to relatable for me, but that's a long story. Great write!! Dennis |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Though it may be a brief encounter you share it is another chapter in your life to cherish Life is a story waiting to happen..Go on.... Create, Live and Love |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ah but in those brief moments of time she gave you back those ten years. What to do with them.. |
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