Open Poetry #24 |
Brown Eyed Flight |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Brown Eyed Flight deep brown eyes hold me tenderly close tightly in gaze seeing in me believing what no other can and I am amazed looking back I glide following the movement of his watch observing me does he not know he is the reason my wings fly free |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
men are smarter than we give them credit for...yes. |
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Rusty Junior Member
since 2002-12-14
Posts 18 |
I really enjoyed this simple, but meaningful poem. This was really good. Rusty |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Helen, this is so cool. Does he, or doesn't he? |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This one's true for me, too, because my Love also has brown eyes... "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-17-2002 11:08 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is so gorgeous, sweet friend, my Joanna has green eyes but she makes me feel this same special way! (kiss on cheek) This is a gorgeous love poem, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
he does A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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