Open Poetry #24 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
Come Come walk with me a fantasy Upon a ship of argosy And there we’ll ride the shadow waive A phantom ship that holds the brave A trip of non-reality With pleasures of totality A cruise within the sea of ID The lifting of Pandora’s lid There is no credit card to use And nothing there for you to lose Perhaps a windmill in a joust A pleasant thought that you could roust. It is a place of shadowed walls A pleasant place of songbird calls A place that lives within your soul An ever-present living shoal So why not while a lullaby And dream you are a butterfly. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If I butter-fly onto your petal would it then turn in to silvered metal? Would you joust with me in my swift flight? or simply wave the air, a magical Knight? Would you lend to me your fantasy teas as for summer days, roll back reality... Smiling here. Happy Holidays, Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, All of the above. ![]() ![]() |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i do love nonreality, but i find i slip into it too often , at times, and no a credit card wont get you there, thankfully there are some places only the imagination could visit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Point well taken, happy holiday. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, Another of your flight of fancies.... so positive and uplifting. I love it! Happy Day, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I'll go with you to land of Oz a butterfly in minutes pause ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Pat, And a happy Holiday to you and yours. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Be delighted to have you. ![]() |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
![]() ![]() Merry Christmas Stinky bring Randy and meet me under the mistletoe *L* *winkiewinkie* ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You bet, here I come on Randys back. ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) This is soooooooo beautifully graceful, sweet friend, I wish you and your whole family the most merriest Christmas and for your hearts to all feel light like butterflies gossamer wings! (big hugggssssss) Happy Holidays, dearest friend! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you my friend. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And the band plays on within the mind of fantasies... Nicely done Sir Sy.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Barry. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
"A cruise within the sea of ID The lifting of Pandora’s lid" What a great line, and I'm quite sure it would do just that! Dream on, young man This was a pleasure to read Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Thank you my dear and may you have the brightes of a New Year. Love Sy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
why not...yes...why not. |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
i like this, and respect the quality of your work. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
"So why not while a lullaby And dream you are a butterfly." beautiful! believe I will!!--enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you passing shadows. christian Thank you for the nice comment. Sandpiper Thank you and why not. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, my mind's eye always likes to "see" your beautiful poetry...... ![]() ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl And I always like to see your beautiful reply. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sy~ I just LOVE your poetry. I really enjoyed your choice of words in this piece. The fantasy became reality as I read. ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
lovely visions dancing and fluttering around in my head. Nice write! ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vicky, Thank you so much for the read and wonderful comment. Salty, Appreciate your read and nice reply. |
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