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Destiny
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Destiny |
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smalls Member
since 2002-12-20
Posts 62 |
Destiny She had flown by With every sense passed Like a breeze bristling Through four seasons last. Known before you pondered Written with her fine ink and hand The moment she laid eyes on you Your truly yours life began. Wearing your pretty pink dress Fitted in your nice blue jeans She had made you perfect Showing you what love means. Days she broke your darling heart Days she sprinkled candy kisses She had made you perfect Revealing what a naked soul misses. My poetry online |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
"Revealing what a naked soul misses"--love the poem, LOVE this line--applause! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Larry, That last line, ~touching!~ Liked this a great deal. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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smalls Member
since 2002-12-20
Posts 62 |
Thank you for your replies... I know there are ups and dows of relatonships, but together, they make life and love complete. Happy holidays! My poetry online |
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