Open Poetry #24 |
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Listen To The Goose Steps |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia ![]() |
Listen to the goose steps..... the march of time in goose step rhyme hup two three four war war war war twisted minds like lemon rinds take bitter pill and kill kill kill the pain is real the bullets feel the rip and tear what do you care? keep the rhythm stroke the gun wave your flag at everyone the march of time in goose step rhyme feeds war machine and pockets dime and they all went marching down to the woods to get out of the rain BOOM BOOM BOOM |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Excellent Kacy, the layout of the poem really drives it home. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks for marching to a different tune. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, sad...good theme, and nice layout. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The visual is excellent. The message SHOULD be apparent. Hugs Kacy. I'm with you all the way on this'n. ![]() Happy holidays...and PEACE. |
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