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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-12-23 11:51 PM

Your travels take you far my love
To lay thee down on stranger shores
My thoughts take flight to join you there
And in my dreams this sound adores

My fingertips to stroke your brow
To lay thee worries softly down
My heart takes flight to join you there
And in these whispered sweets renown

I slip beside to feel by heart
To lay there warmly bathed in smile
My mind wraps close to ease your dreams
And in my care to chat a while

You’ll find most tender of my words
Upon your pillow lay
My heart takes flight to hold you close
Conversing soft the miles away

Copyright Kkh 12/23/02

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-12-24 01:02 AM

Your travels take you far my love
To lay thee down on stranger shores
My thoughts take flight to join you there
And in my dreams this sound adores

There's a sense of well being and such
comfort in your words...

I liked this a lot...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2002-12-24 03:01 AM

never very far at all...

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2002-12-24 10:30 AM

Just so soft and loving. Enjoyed a great deal.

Happy Holidays to you and yours.

Warm regards and hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-12-24 10:34 AM

ThisDiamond
Well and warmly done, enjoyed.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2002-12-24 10:38 AM

enjoyed

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

6 posted 2002-12-24 12:30 PM

As comforting as laying down a weary head, next to a beloved, upon feathered down, at day's end, a ghost as real as the heart who beats for it: these span the distance, and bring close the loved ones too far to be with it.

Kathleen, as you always do, write with a loving and caring nobility.

Merry Christmas, sweet Kathleen.
Jeff

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-12-24 12:34 PM

Kathy, this is a beautiful poem for a
person that is special...I hope it is read
and enjoyed..held close to a heart....

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2002-12-24 12:35 PM

I feel the same about my Gary.......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

9 posted 2002-12-24 03:24 PM

very well done with a beautiful flow and a more beautiful heart.
big hugs and Merry Christmas, Kathy

Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

10 posted 2002-12-24 03:34 PM

Kathy...here's hoping Christmas brings you near to the one you love, even if only in heart. Love, you know, can bridge all distances.
Merry Christmas

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2002-12-24 03:39 PM

Kathleen...this is so very soft and gentle.
Very nicely said.
Have a wonderful and peaceful Christmas.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

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