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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2002-12-23 07:03 AM

moon be gone tonight,
scatter these roses
from my eyes,
untap the sky
of its wandful of stars,
his love remains silent still,
let these cloud covers
part for me,
in return
to the sanctuary
of the dark abyss,
in its beautiful truth
of sheer emptiness

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-23-2002 07:06 AM).]

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

1 posted 2002-12-23 09:26 AM

sometimes, truth becomes clear without all the clutter--a bit sad, but well done!!--enjoyed

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-12-23 09:40 AM

inkedgoddess
Emptyness is a state not a fate. Enjoyed

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2002-12-23 11:50 AM

I think I understand this one... or have felt it at least.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2002-12-23 12:22 PM

Inkedgoddess,

Sometimes those who ~seem~ to be the emptiest, are indeed so full of love and kindness it reaches right out and touches and heals, in spite of their state of mind, in most remarkable ways, regardless where we encounter them, or what the dynamic was....
Silence is the noisiest sound, isn't it, and says so much, sometimes......
but, then, we hear what we want.

This may not have anything to do with your meaning, however, this is what I thought upon reading.

Enjoying your poetry....

Hugs and warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (12-23-2002 12:26 PM).]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2002-12-23 12:26 PM

A cup that is full...has no room for more.
Take heart. Beautifully said. ThisDiamond
Merry Christmas my friend.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2002-12-23 12:57 PM

a bit sad, yes, but that's the way I like 'em

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2002-12-23 02:06 PM

inked, there are many stars in the sky, perhaps it's time to wish upon a new one.

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

8 posted 2002-12-23 04:55 PM

I can feel your tenderness, your loneliness, your pain and frustration. I long to wipe away the tear from your cheek. Your passion is endless but yet not shared. I can't travel to Vegas but I can to your bliss if only the opportunities allow.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2002-12-23 06:57 PM

hey brooklyn,

join the list!

Rainbowdust
Member

since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

10 posted 2002-12-23 07:52 PM

in return
to the sanctuary
of the dark abyss,
in its beautiful truth
of sheer emptiness

There's beauty in everything if only we have the will to look for it, and the courage to find it.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

11 posted 2002-12-23 09:10 PM

inkedgoddess - written well with much thought...

BC

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2002-12-26 01:06 AM

May you be full...James

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

13 posted 2002-12-26 07:04 AM

untap the sky

What a cool line

Maree

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