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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2002-12-23 04:45 AM

A drifting Ronin,
was I, stripped of aim
and purpose
Laying in self imposed
exhile
And shame consumed me
Until at last,
I pierced the bowels
of idleness with
inked quill
A blade which bled
my words upon these
pages
Is honour
restored?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2002-12-23 04:47 AM

I'm not sure it ever really vanishes...good write and I know the feeling well...self imposed exhile...continue on!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2002-12-23 06:50 AM

good start,
but you need to come up for air and sun too

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2002-12-23 11:08 AM

very cool write!!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-12-23 01:15 PM

Hehe. 'Twas never lost, just temporarily disemboweled. Minor surgery fixed that problem. Now get back on your horse, knight.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2002-12-23 01:56 PM

Dixie thank you and I hope you're exhile has ended

I know inked I know. Eventually, I will lurk a little while longer

Thanks alot SEA that's sweet

Kacy I don't think i could get used to riding a horse. They say biking is bad for men's...you know. So imagine a horse. I'll walk. lol

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-01-18 08:24 PM

Purpose, restored.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2003-01-18 08:28 PM

no knight meets shame in resting from the lists. Back to the fight.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-01-18 10:26 PM

Thanks Sunshine for digging this up and for the kind reply, this was one of my favs though i think it needs a little rewrite.

Kethry thanks but the rest was a vvvvvvvvvvery long one, still yes i am glad to be back in the thick of things

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

9 posted 2003-01-20 11:10 AM

Until at last,
I pierced the bowels
of idleness with
inked quill

liking this a lot. missed this dont kno how.re write? shut up raph, re write it, and die! now stop being idle, and write some more! lol
lots of love gemma xxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

10 posted 2003-01-20 11:13 AM

I too, often wonder if I can "write" my wrongs right...

This IS a thoughtful take on it.

winston
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 204
NW of Eden

11 posted 2003-01-20 12:05 PM

Seems to me like there's an
Eastern theme going on
in PiP. E.g. Japan,
Korea, China, India,
Afghanistan, Iran,
Iraq, Israel, Saudi Arabia...
Thanks

It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency.
--G. "DUBYA" BUSH. June 14, 2001. Unaware of rolling TV camera.

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