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Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

0 posted 2002-12-23 12:33 PM

Sometimes there's more
I would say
But the line~
it's much too long
And I'm stubborn

I want to be special
Even if that's impossible
Because I found "it" first
I found YOU first

I was first to have my
heart twisted by your
bittersweet resonance
Now too many answer
the call and I am lost
in the throng...

Perhaps I am the
Personification of a
Tantrum
Complete with a pout
And girly tears

But I loved you first
So...

There!

Sunkissed.

© Copyright 2002 R. T. M. - All Rights Reserved

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-12-23 12:40 PM

Perhaps I am the
Personification of a
Tantrum
Complete with a pout
And girly tears

But I loved you first
So...

There!

You said this so well~

Wonderful wonderful it is!!!

Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

2 posted 2002-12-23 01:01 AM

Thanks Blues...

Sunkissed.

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

3 posted 2002-12-23 01:31 AM

and a tantrum can be seen as this is read. Pouty lips. I see this its painting a picture I LOVE THIS POEM!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-12-23 01:39 AM

I got tickled by this one. Thanks.

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

5 posted 2002-12-23 02:17 AM

I think more arguments have been won with those final words "So... There!" An enjoyable read and thank you for sharing.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-12-23 07:03 AM

Not what I was expecting,
but I've come to
expect that...

especially when sunkissed.

Smiling big here...

Sandpiper
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

7 posted 2002-12-23 09:24 AM

*smiles*..feeling better now? hehe--enjoyed--Merry Christmas

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2002-12-23 09:43 AM

Sunkissed
Merry Christmas,enjoyed.

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

9 posted 2002-12-23 10:35 AM

Oh, I like this one. Well done!

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

10 posted 2002-12-23 10:38 AM

REALLY enjoyed this!!!some clever thoughts. very well written!
lots of christmas love, gemma xxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Midnitesun

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Gaia

11 posted 2002-12-23 12:17 PM

So there.

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

12 posted 2002-12-23 04:08 PM

Thanks everyone for the kind comments. This one just came off the top of my head.

Big hugs to you all!

Sunkissed.

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