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Rainbowdust
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since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2002-12-22 09:59 PM

Ice cold water
Dropped suddenly onto
Heat flushed skin...
Trailing slowly over
Sun-bronzed curves and hard edges
Steam dances
Towards the ceiling,
Misting up the mirror as
Candlelight illuminates:
Silhouettes gliding...
Bubbles silently disappear;
Shadows flicker
Throats become dry,
The thirst rises and peaks...
Candles die,
And the tub overflows...

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

© Copyright 2002 Shireen - All Rights Reserved

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-12-22 10:45 PM

WOW! Talk about some steam...
You've penned another keeper.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2002-12-22 10:55 PM

Wow, here, too! Great. Enjoyed the imagery. Very good!

Hugs and warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Larry C

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Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2002-12-23 12:02 PM

Should I be picturing this?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

4 posted 2002-12-23 12:21 PM

ooooo, nice night out...:supergrins: and laughing at Larry.

nice steamy stuff,Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2002-12-23 01:47 AM

great imagery here, I love the scene.

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