Open Poetry #24 |
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rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England ![]() |
I would give the whole world Just to stop you from feeling the cold All I want is for you to smile eternally Even if that means never seeing me I could live without you As long as I know you live in heaven That your world is perfect in every way That would be all I need today You hold more inside your world Than my life could ever posses You speak as if an angel Your words make sense to all Look me in the eye And tell me that you care I know you can’t I’m just here to pick you up I mean nothing to no one I’m a solitary nobody I’m a lonely lost soul But I will never stop loving you And even though you don’t appreciate me I will carry on being me And try to make your life the best place it could possibly be Because that’s what you mean to me. "Some men see things as they are and say why? I dream things that never were and say why not?" |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sounds like an unconditional love letter to me. Be there, no matter what. |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
What an example of true selfless love, and what a beautiful poem! You hold more inside your world Than my life could ever posses... They were my favourite lines. ![]() The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Very beautiful selfless love. To be able to let go, or, even never have but, still to want the very best for someone, that is remarkable. True love. Hugs and warm regards, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now that's what I call unconditional love... |
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