Open Poetry #24 |
Breathless |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Breathless When our hearts are together looking out over the horizon of tomorrow, a certain type of peace fills my soul~ The tick tock of time stands still as I am held in your embrace, and together we stand upon the shores of the future~ Each drop of golden sunlight seems that much brighter, every sip from the cup of life tastes vintage~ We dance in sunsets glow, placing our dreams in the hands of destiny~ Like an angel sent from heaven you warm a spirit that had seemingly forgotten how to fly~ Oceans of brilliant blues can not compare to the depths of your eyes when you gaze into my heart~ Each touch is a cherished moment that can not slip away with the passing of time as they are embedded in my heart for eternity~ To simply hear you whisper my name and be held in your love is a precious gift of heart~ Each moment spent with you leaves me ~breathless~ (Repost from open 19 revised 12-22-02) I know that you can 'read' me but can you 'hear' "me"? [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (12-22-2002 12:13 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so beautiful sweet lady! He sounds like a very special love. Gently and perfectly penned. ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
He is the one who catches me when I fall and helps me to stand strong again Nancy.....indeed very special.....(at least to me anyhow....*grinz*) Thanks hon. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
You know this is gorgeous |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Like an angel sent from heaven you warm a spirit that had seemingly forgotten how to fly~ Beautiful, and I love those lines...well done Donna.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - you do leave me breathless with this write, a'hhhhhhhh.... BC [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (12-22-2002 12:44 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Donna, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this made me cry reading it as you golden heart pours out with loves smile over tehse words, yay! (kiss on cheek) May your love always make you feel heavenbound, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Simply beautiful. Enjoyed greatly! Hugs and warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i miss my angel even more when i read this |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Donna~ Beautiful words and thoughts of your love for that special person in your life. The gift of love Given to us from God above May your love forever soar on wings of a dove " To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you " |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just like in the fairytale! (except much better) |
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