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Winter's Song
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Winter's Song |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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A Winter Song A winter song is blowing through the needled limbs of pine From distances beyond the eye this melody divine Has swept across the mountain range eliminating space Between two hearts that capture what the eye cannot embrace A bitter icy wind in whistling tunes of winter’s page Will someday turn another leaf of nature’s changing stage Another breeze will blow my way, another lovely hymn Will resonate in warmer days from dogwood’s blooming limb But let the season take it’s time, let icy chimes depart From evergreens that live year round, just as a loving heart There is no season for the pine, no season for the tune That sends a kiss in frigid winds and balmy breeze of June My love is mystical as wind and never can be seen My love is timeless as the graceful bough of evergreen Elzabeth Santos |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Teach me to write a sonnet... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Lovely,  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Excellent sonnet filled with images of beauty. Wonderful read, Elizabeth! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sunshine, It is you who teach me, Thank you Sy, Love those hugs Vas, Thanks for your kind words HUgs Liz |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, love should be an unconditional and natural thing that always makes its course and never stops! (kiss on cheek) Your golden heart radiates with this gift, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
An interesting poem, but what is the point of "evergreens live all year round"? I think that ought to be left to the reader - to find out what 'evergreen' is. "am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah dear Liz...not only is your love timeless, but also your poetry. Sheer beauty in this one  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful as always Charisma |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Dear Liz, your Winter's Song warmed my heart as you always have a habbit of doing.  TitiaLike scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Liz, this is beautiful. My dear, you constantly thrill me with your words. Hugs to you for a wonderful and loving Christmas...Marti Let our love circle the world and |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed the read |
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