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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2002-12-21 10:58 PM

please stop
please stop
please stop
I rock
I'm child
within a silent scream
my hands
a veil to cover ears
and my eyes so tight
that tears
surprise me
landing
on my tongue--
claiming land
in name of king.

please stop
please stop
please stop
I plead
I'm bitch
I Am
border--
collie--
nipping
hinds
of the herd in stray...

There is dust
beneath my paws
and I smell
no promise of
a pool
to cleanse
the burrs
in fur

with miles

and miles

to travel yet.

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

1 posted 2002-12-21 11:11 PM

Tis a dog's life but seven years for every human..........glibness aside this hurt to read.

enchantingvamp
Member

since 2002-12-21

Posts 214
Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas!

2 posted 2002-12-22 01:19 AM

I dont really know what to say....except wow...i'm trying to reach the bottom of this pool here and it gets deeper and deeper each time i read it

Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2002-12-22 01:26 AM

wow.....
extremely intense....
*hugs* for you

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2002-12-22 04:11 AM

Karen you write everything oh so well. Keep em coming I devour everyone

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-12-22 11:52 PM

I'm looking for the pool too. Seems as if there is a big thirsty crowd out here.
Loved this one, sister goodwitch.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2002-12-23 12:53 PM

yes...the pool. smile.

Thanks all.

Anybody have a valium?

grin?

sigh.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2002-12-23 06:58 AM

youre a straight shooter,
i dig women who have guts....

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2002-12-23 11:51 AM

ouch?
just stop.... so often it or they would...things could be a whole lot less painful

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

9 posted 2002-12-23 12:02 PM

Ow...

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

10 posted 2002-12-23 12:14 PM

smiling now...

I'd read this one aloud to a friend, and she commented that I sounded like one of those annoying women in the grocery stores who couldn't control her kids--and I looked up, surprised, saying, "But I was talking to my HUSBAND!"

*giggle*?

sigh

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