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Open Poetry #24

Trickle of thoughts

darkling
Member

since 2001-08-28

Posts 90
altered state of mind

0 posted 2002-12-21 08:31 PM

Rain falling from her sky
blue eyes that will never look
at me the same
Unknowingly have I forced upon her
the same emotions that struck me down
I have shared that pain
that same maks of fear
that desolate thought of abandonment
There is nothing I can do for her
but tell her that I have been there before
And the hurt will end
If only she would believe in her own
Salvation

enchantingvamp
Member

since 2002-12-21

Posts 214
Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas!

1 posted 2002-12-21 08:47 PM

Wow, I like it....I just wish I was better at expressing how it affects me....

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-12-21 09:01 PM

darkling - I enjoyed your writing. Nice write...

BC

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2002-12-21 10:43 PM

Certainly an excellent write...disturbing...
ThisDiamond

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-12-23 04:50 AM

that's all you can do....that's enough.

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