Open Poetry #24 |
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Why, I Ask, Humbly Of Me? |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
Why? Why, when I read my own thoughts, those from so deep within the bowel, the soul, do I cry? Tears have fallen as the rains of life. Tears have stained the cloth and skin of me...Tears continue to cleanse and purge...to bring forth the life of who I am... And share... Why, I ask? Why would a man sit for decades, silent to the world in speech of heart? Silent to his own self in confiding of that which hurt, or brought to the face a tender smile, a twinkle of eye that would show in reflect the warmth, warmth wanting to come forth into the night of write... As the candle dims, as the wick shortens, the quill and pen remain ever sturdy. A hand fills the well with fresh ink and... a poet, a man....reborn... Lives..... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!!! Extremely well done Barry! You continue to astound me as your creativity grows in leaps and bounds! ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Barry, This is incredibly beautiful and touches the depth of my soul. I love it when a poem comes from heart and you can feel the honesty. Enjoyed greatly and re-read, tearing my eyes. Hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"As the candle dims, as the wick shortens, the quill and pen remain ever sturdy. A hand fills the well with fresh ink and... a poet, a man....reborn... Lives....." this is just beautiful....I don't know what else to say ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cleansing and purging...that's what tears do, yes... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful gary, i too have been released through words. Thank you very much for this raph |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your muse has been whispering... |
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