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Open Poetry #24

Fading

Amature2
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

0 posted 2003-02-13 08:56 PM

Fading

I feel I am fading into myself
The image on the mirror is going out of view
With the emptiness inside me
Collapsing into my inner-self
And will soon be a memory to myself

"This we know - the Earth does not belong to man - man belongs to the Earth." Chief Seattle

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-02-13 10:24 PM

Wow...this is a wonderful expression.
You have much to say...and you say it so beautifuly.
Eric

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-02-13 10:57 PM

wow, this created an amazing image and ..understanding.
Well done, I enjoyed. And hope things are going ok.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-02-14 02:53 AM

yeah, I know that feeling

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