Open Poetry #24 |
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Of You I Dream |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Stars suddenly blend peacefully in the sky above my window, in light of her. Phantasms of she, that is called love, fills voids in my serenity. The moonlight contends her pristine glow, but forfeits and gives Majesty, to enchantment more becoming. I waltz love upon humble feet while whispers seep through the smile known to melt icy peaks to liquid emotions, transform the silence and radiate tears of laughter. Crystal prisms flare rainbows and join in the gathering of lips first kiss, recalling it well, as a circle remembers it's path. Wake me not. For if dormant be my reality, then I shall lay in silent slumber, where true love resides. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Yay!!! (happy singing sparrow chirps of joy) Oh Albert, I'm so happy you're here, I have missed you for so long and am so happy you've joined this wonderful family too, you'll love it here, I promise, yay! (does happy dance) Welcome to Passions, sweet Albert, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (big bluebird hugs) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Albert, thank you for sharing ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton (Singing Sparrow) "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-13-2003 09:13 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome! This is very romantic and beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
![]() Enjoyed your first post. Have fun here !! |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you everyone!! It's Great to be part of this family! HUGS NOAH!! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family!!! This is a wonderful first post - it's soft and flows so nicely! I hope you enjoy your time here. I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special greeting! ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Albert, I enjoyed your first post and hope to read more of your work, soon. I hope that you like it here at PIP, and Welcome to our Family Of Friends. ![]() . . ![]() . . Ethel....garysgirl ![]() |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you poet and Ethel!! I will be posting more!! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I waltz love upon humble feet while whispers seep through the smile known to melt icy peaks to liquid emotions, transform the silence and radiate tears of laughter. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Woah! This is awesome! just leads to tons of emotions and smiles ..I know I'll look forward to reading more of your poetry. Welcome to the Blue Pages!!! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you Alyssa!!!!!!!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a write...very truly romantic! Welcome! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Albert~ What a beautiful first post this is. Again..welcome to Passions. ![]() ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Albert! I'm sure Noah has clued you in, as his friend, that we're an odd bunch...poets, writers, [not always one and the same] readers, lovers, sighers, moths...if you ever have any questions, and Noah's not around, just knock...we're right here! Karilea |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you sunshine. I can be odd myself. So truely I hope to fit in!! |
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poohbear19 Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 94Colorado, USA |
GOOD WRITE! it is so heartfelt. keep on writing. Andrea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
![]() I'm so glad Noah showed you the way to the blue pages. I am much enjoying your work! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
As everyone said, wonderful first post. It would be a wonderful third fourth or fifth as well. Went into the library for later reading, must say i enjoyed it alot. Waiting for more i am. |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Welcome to Passions, Albert! What a great entry! I know you'll feel right at home! Rf |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you everyone! I am touched by all the welcome's and heartfelt words! It is a pleasure to post here with such wonderful people!! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Albert your poetry is trully amazing. Your words touch my heart so softly and so immensely at the same time. I am warmed throughout by your touching words. I can't wait to see what else you can entrance me with! It is a true pleasure to read the words inscripted on your heart. Tons of hugs, KoKo I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
KoKo....You seem to know how to keep making me blush. I am touched by your love for my writing and hope that you will be touched by many more to come! Thank you my sweet. Hugs back to you. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
![]() Your poetry has a nice pleasant rhythm to it, and was a joy to read. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you Midnite. BETTER LATE THAN NEVER!!! ![]() |
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