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Albert J. Allie
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0 posted 2003-02-13 08:55 PM


Stars suddenly blend peacefully in the sky
above my window, in light of her.
Phantasms of she, that is called love,
fills voids in my serenity.
The moonlight contends her pristine glow,
but forfeits and gives Majesty,
to enchantment more becoming.
I waltz love upon humble feet
while whispers seep through the smile
known to melt icy peaks to liquid emotions,
transform the silence and radiate tears of laughter.
Crystal prisms flare rainbows and join
in the gathering of lips first kiss,
recalling it well, as a circle remembers it's path.
Wake me not. For if dormant be my reality,
then I shall lay in silent slumber,
where true love resides.

© Copyright 2003 Albert J. Allie - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-02-13 09:12 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! (happy singing sparrow chirps of joy) Oh Albert, I'm so happy you're here, I have missed you for so long and am so happy you've joined this wonderful family too, you'll love it here, I promise, yay! (does happy dance) Welcome to Passions, sweet Albert, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (big bluebird hugs) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Albert, thank you for sharing



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
(Singing Sparrow)


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-13-2003 09:13 PM).]

Margherita
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2 posted 2003-02-13 09:14 PM


Welcome! This is very romantic and beautiful.
Love, Margherita

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3 posted 2003-02-13 10:12 PM




        Enjoyed your first post.
              Have fun here !!

Albert J. Allie
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4 posted 2003-02-13 10:15 PM


Thank you everyone!! It's Great to be part of this family! HUGS NOAH!!
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5 posted 2003-02-13 11:32 PM


Welcome to the family!!! This is a wonderful first post - it's soft and flows so nicely! I hope you enjoy your time here. I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special greeting!
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6 posted 2003-02-14 12:01 PM


Albert, I enjoyed your first post and hope to read more
of your work, soon. I hope that you like it here at PIP,
and Welcome to our Family Of Friends.
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Ethel....garysgirl  

Albert J. Allie
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7 posted 2003-02-14 12:30 PM


Thank you poet and Ethel!! I will be posting more!!
GG
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8 posted 2003-02-14 01:15 AM


I waltz love upon humble feet
while whispers seep through the smile
known to melt icy peaks to liquid emotions,
transform the silence and radiate tears of laughter.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Woah! This is awesome! just leads to tons of emotions and smiles ..I know I'll look forward to reading more of your poetry.
Welcome to the Blue Pages!!!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Albert J. Allie
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9 posted 2003-02-14 01:31 AM


Thank you Alyssa!!!!!!!!!
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10 posted 2003-02-14 02:38 AM


what a write...very truly romantic! Welcome!
vlraynes
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11 posted 2003-02-14 05:21 AM



Albert~
What a beautiful first post this is.
Again..welcome to Passions.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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12 posted 2003-02-14 06:17 AM



Welcome to Passions, Albert!  I'm sure Noah has clued you in, as his friend, that we're an odd bunch...poets, writers, [not always one and the same] readers, lovers, sighers, moths...if you ever have any questions, and Noah's not around, just knock...we're right here!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Albert J. Allie
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13 posted 2003-02-14 11:11 AM


Thank you sunshine. I can be odd myself. So truely I hope to fit in!!
poohbear19
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14 posted 2003-02-14 01:40 PM


GOOD WRITE! it is so heartfelt. keep on writing.

Andrea

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15 posted 2003-02-14 01:46 PM



I'm so glad Noah showed you the way to the blue pages.
I am much enjoying your work!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

sellout007
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16 posted 2003-02-14 01:49 PM


As everyone said, wonderful first post. It would be a wonderful third fourth or fifth as well.

Went into the library for later reading, must say i enjoyed it alot.

Waiting for more i am.

Robert Frazier
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17 posted 2003-02-14 02:09 PM


Welcome to Passions, Albert!  What a great entry!  I know you'll feel right at home!

Rf

Albert J. Allie
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18 posted 2003-02-14 02:32 PM


Thank you everyone! I am touched by all the welcome's and heartfelt words! It is a pleasure to post here with such wonderful people!!
KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
19 posted 2003-02-16 02:03 AM


Albert your poetry is trully amazing. Your words touch my heart so softly and so immensely at the same time. I am warmed throughout by your touching words. I can't wait to see what else you can entrance me with! It is a true pleasure to read the words inscripted on your heart.

Tons of hugs,
KoKo

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Albert J. Allie
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20 posted 2003-02-16 02:32 AM


KoKo....You seem to know how to keep making me blush. I am touched by your love for my writing and hope that you will be touched by many more to come! Thank you my sweet.

Hugs back to you.

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21 posted 2003-02-17 01:40 PM


Welcome to Passions, Albert. Sorry it took me so long to get to the welcome party!
Your poetry has a nice pleasant rhythm to it, and was a joy to read.

Albert J. Allie
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22 posted 2003-02-17 06:22 PM


Thank you Midnite. BETTER LATE THAN NEVER!!!

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