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Sun of faith
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since 2003-01-31
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0 posted 2003-02-13 08:43 PM



Here is my fear
You hold no remorse
This pain is caused by you
And you are the source
I feel sorrow in the day
And cry all night
You were my angel
You used to shine so bright
Deceived by someone who didn’t care
And by love that was never there

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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-02-13 10:23 PM


So sad and beautiful.
Eric

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-02-14 03:00 AM


yeah...that sucks
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2003-02-14 06:58 AM


May your tears dry .... and love be reborn.
Sad song of your heart.
Margherita

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2003-02-14 07:40 AM


yes, it hurts, sometimes,
days like today are even more resounding in
broken hearts

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