Open Poetry #24 |
Symbols...You And I |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
And these words are but symbols greater still yet lies beyond. The source that feeds life to life, beauty to beauty, and love to all - Is funneled and channeled for truth to be told. And what are we if not but runes? Sacred symbols of the Divine. Expressed quite grandly, though greater still is our true source - Our beings simply pin points, The Infinite trickled down as human form. So what is life, and what is death? Perhaps but only nature recreating what has lived and breathed once - and now lives and breathes once more. Aahhh...and is such grand design simply chance? Or is it life creating life as an Artist - wiping clean each canvassed sheet, painting birth, death, renewal. For the Artist listens to the voice of forever - painting such love, such grace, such beauty, Through the brush strokes of her soul. And all points of eternity, what was and now is. and everything for ever more - is all contained within an instant, and the Artist knows that life is but a brief imagining of what is now, and the possibility of what could be. I have struggled with such vast expanse - a simple poet battling in vain. How to express a Force so large, so full of beauty, with only symbols forming words? And as it is with every struggle. a fight - a pause - a letting go, the answer comes to me quite clearly - Love. This one word will say it all. [This message has been edited by Ericc (02-13-2003 08:04 PM).] |
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Rider New Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 7Framingham (rural Massachusetts) |
I enjoyed your poem a lot, besides for the pure substance, its organization added to the poem a lot! -Rider |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Eric..and very true... That one word says it all...Love. ~Hugs, Smiles and a Happy Valentine's Day to you~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Symbols You and I .... artists of Life and Love. This is sublime! Like a Divine breath touching the heart. Margherita |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very, very beautiful, Eric. I love the way you wrote this...and the content is so true with such depth...I loved it all.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Oh Eric, this is beautiful, sweet friend, the simple pleasures of life are the best ones and I am pleased you have found such joy in love, yay! (big hugggsssss) This is a true gem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
i love how this poem is so deep and ponders the infinite unknown and what we cant explain.Love is certainly something mysterious.yet so simple in explaining every lovely butterfly in your stomach. ~ Talia |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-13-2003 11:01 PM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Eric, Total perfection. I really love this. Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
one word, yes |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Aaaaahhh... beautiful. You truly amaze me with your magic; I am so very impressed, and more importantly, I am touched, left in deep thought and beautiful calm and loving peace brought on by your words. Meditation in poetry form. Thank you... Love, Moca |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
well spoken, well written thoughts come across the page |
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