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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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0 posted 2003-02-13 07:53 PM



And these words are
but symbols
greater
still
yet
lies
beyond.
The source that feeds
life
to
life,
beauty to beauty,
and
love
to
all -
Is funneled and channeled
for truth to be told.

And what are we
if not but
runes?
Sacred symbols of the
Divine.
Expressed quite grandly,
though
greater still is our
true source -
Our beings simply
pin
points,
The Infinite trickled
down
as
human
form.

So what is life,
and what is
death?
Perhaps but only nature
recreating what has lived and
breathed once -
and now lives and breathes
once more.

Aahhh...and is such grand design
simply chance?
Or is it life creating life
as an Artist -
wiping clean each canvassed sheet,
painting birth,
death,
renewal.
For the Artist listens to the voice
of forever -
painting
such love,
such grace,
such beauty,
Through the brush strokes
of her soul.

And all points of eternity,
what was and now is.
and everything
for
ever
more -
is all contained within
an instant,
and the Artist knows
that life is but a brief
imagining
of what is now,
and the possibility
of what could
be.

I have struggled with such
vast expanse -
a simple poet battling in vain.
How to express a Force
so large,
so full of beauty,
with only symbols
forming words?

And as it is with every struggle.
a fight - a pause - a letting go,
the answer comes to me
quite clearly -

Love.

This one word
will say it
all.

[This message has been edited by Ericc (02-13-2003 08:04 PM).]

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Rider
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1 posted 2003-02-13 07:55 PM


   I enjoyed your poem a lot, besides for the pure substance, its organization added to the poem a lot!

-Rider

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-02-13 07:59 PM


Beautiful Eric..and very true...
That one word says it all...Love.
~Hugs, Smiles and a Happy Valentine's Day to you~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2003-02-13 08:41 PM


Symbols You and I .... artists of Life and Love. This is sublime! Like a Divine breath touching the heart.
Margherita

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-02-13 09:15 PM


Very, very beautiful, Eric. I love the
way you wrote this...and the content
is so true with such depth...I loved it all....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-02-13 09:19 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Eric, this is beautiful, sweet friend, the simple pleasures of life are the best ones and I am pleased you have found such joy in love, yay! (big hugggsssss) This is a true gem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon
6 posted 2003-02-13 10:02 PM


i love how this poem is so deep and ponders the infinite unknown and what we cant explain.Love is certainly something mysterious.yet so simple in explaining every lovely butterfly in your stomach. ~ Talia
inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2003-02-13 10:59 PM





[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-13-2003 11:01 PM).]

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
8 posted 2003-02-13 11:38 PM




Eric,

Total perfection. I really love this.


Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2003-02-14 02:49 AM


one word, yes
cinnamongirl
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since 2003-02-02
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10 posted 2003-02-16 10:29 PM


Aaaaahhh... beautiful.  You truly amaze me with your magic; I am so very impressed, and more importantly, I am touched, left in deep thought and beautiful calm and loving peace brought on by your words.  Meditation in poetry form.

Thank you...

Love,
Moca

inkedgoddess
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11 posted 2003-02-17 10:46 AM


well spoken, well written thoughts come across the page
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