»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #24
»
Searched, found, mine.
| Open Poetry #24 |
|
Searched, found, mine. |
|
|
gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
|
The edge of pier ends where water lies ~ calm~ at the center heart of sea where human eyes banished descend the wood to platform of sand beneath the wash coulour~ mingles in deep blue backdrop see through sash perfectly formed ~~~swimming~~~ in sunlit bath the adventure I waited for to be treasured with the longevity of ocean mysterious ....untouchable. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
||
| © Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved | |||
Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I like this alot! |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gemjop Good one, enjoyed. |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 great one! |
||
|
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
||
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, I like this a lot. It has power behind it. The way you put it down really added to the words. Very good... Hugs to you from Ethel Mae...  |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
