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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-02-13 09:43 AM



The edge of pier

ends where water lies
   ~ calm~  

at the center
heart of sea

where
human eyes
banished

descend the wood
to platform of sand

beneath the wash

coulour~
        mingles

in deep blue backdrop
see through sash

perfectly formed

     ~~~swimming~~~

in sunlit bath

the adventure
I waited for

to be treasured

with the longevity
of ocean mysterious

....untouchable.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved
Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-02-13 10:05 AM


I like this alot!
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-02-13 10:15 AM


gemjop
Good one, enjoyed.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-02-13 12:33 PM


great one!
the_loner_23
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4 posted 2003-02-13 12:34 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-02-13 12:47 PM


Gemma, I like this a lot. It has power
behind it. The way you put it down really added to the words.

Very good...

Hugs to you from
Ethel Mae...

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