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Open Poetry #24

Inner door/outer door

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-13 06:40 AM

Inner door/outer door

touches
he could give
yes they
could be
so tender
but
forgotten how
to put them
to use
being hurt
now
could he
remember

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2003-02-13 09:06 AM

open doors of kindness
with gentle touch
kind smile
with soft intent
stay awhile

close doors to sadness
bolt the deadlock
fix the chain
let the door block
harsh reframe

Gloom

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-02-13 10:04 AM

Both the poem and its reply our lovely

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-02-13 10:17 AM

1slick_lady
Point well taken,
enjoyed.

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-02-13 07:09 PM

Wonderful expression.
Eric

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

5 posted 2003-02-13 07:11 PM

Time for self reflection.

Rf

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-02-14 03:32 AM

you know I love this...

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