Open Poetry #24 |
"Flower" |
shannon harter Junior Member
since 2003-02-03
Posts 31waesaw,IN USA |
"Flower" the river flows, my heart goes, without you. people live, people die, dont have time to question why. if you wanna leave, be my guest, your one of many, among the rest. im not hurt, dont worry bout me, as time goes by, i will be free. it could be lies, but what do you care, you dont seem the type, that worries about whats fair. so long kid, Ill see ya soon, if it wasnt for me, you wouldnt have bloomed. *this was wrote years ago for an old boyfriend that was pulling away from me. ironically enough, that same boyfriend is now my husband,father of my children,best friend,and the love of my life. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really enjoyed this read. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Annie, Hmmm...I think I know of whom you write...yes actually isn't it that guy you live with that you affectionatly call "ass" all the time?? LOL Give me long enough I will reveal all your secrets...(EG) As I told you when you read this to me, I love it. Love you, Euwy |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Sometimes you need to pull away to realize what there is to loes. very well done |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
shannon, Interesting read, enjoyed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love the true and happy ending to this story! Warm hugs to you and your wonderful family! EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
shannon, I have felt like this before...and not too long ago either nice write, I enjoyed it |
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