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shannon harter
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waesaw,IN USA

0 posted 2003-02-12 09:50 PM



            "Flower"
the river flows,
my heart goes,
without you.

people live,
people die,
dont have time to question why.

if you wanna leave, be my guest,
your one of many,
among the rest.

im not hurt,
dont worry bout me,
as time goes by,
i will be free.

it could be lies,
but what do you care,
you dont seem the type,
that worries about whats fair.

so long kid,
Ill see ya soon,
if it wasnt for me,
you wouldnt have bloomed.

*this was wrote years ago for an old boyfriend that was pulling away from me. ironically enough, that same boyfriend is now my husband,father of my children,best friend,and the love of my life.

© Copyright 2003 shannon harter - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-02-12 09:59 PM


I really enjoyed this read.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
2 posted 2003-02-13 08:54 AM


Annie,

Hmmm...I think I know of whom you write...yes actually isn't it that guy you live with that you affectionatly call "ass" all the time??  LOL Give me long enough I will reveal all your secrets...(EG)

As I told you when you read this to me, I love it.  

Love you, Euwy

Brad Majors
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3 posted 2003-02-13 10:02 AM


Sometimes you need to pull away to realize what there is to loes. very well done
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2003-02-13 10:36 AM


shannon,
Interesting read, enjoyed.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2003-02-13 10:51 AM


I love the true and happy ending to this story!

Warm hugs to you and your wonderful family!

EA

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-02-13 12:24 PM


shannon, I have felt like this before...and not too long ago either

nice write, I enjoyed it

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