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Forever in my heart
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Forever in my heart |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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Though so far away I feel your confusion smell your tears as they are carried on the wind I may be no prophet no physician I offer my heart and eternal ear stroking your hair gently whispering in your ear princess it will be alright kissing your forhead as you fall to sleep in my arms singing you sweetly to dream before returning home saying a wish a prayer for you for us for me kissing your mental picture as I fall to sleep |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is beautiful. A lot of expression and feeling. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Brad,  being with someone in spirit, so beautiful! i loved this. even though not there in body, protecting and caring for in the mind. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Brad, this is a really pretty love poem. I liked it...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very pretty! Eric |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Brad - lovely write of a special time... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very tenderly written. Enjoyed. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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shannon harter Junior Member
since 2003-02-03
Posts 31waesaw,IN USA |
awwww! your putting me on, are guys really this sensitive? god, i hope! loved it! shannon |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh, I do remember those times, working here and she's there.... takes me back.... I'll be telling stories in a minute..... What a clear vision of exactly how it is. Thanks for this one! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
brad...this is just beautiful...h |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh my god! Brad, you had me at the first pen stroke! This one left me aching for more. Beautiful, romantic, and emotion provoking. Please write everyday. Did you see my sister's reply? Let me tell you a secret~she was probably weeping as she read it!! Susan C. ~And Good Morning~ |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
*sigh* (mental note)find a man like Brad |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
glad you liked it. and good morning to you to. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
No, my friend, I said I LOVED it. Susan |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Brad, a great write...thanks for sharing with me |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Okay, I didn't actually "say" it, but indeed, I did imply it strongly... Now, would you mind if I copied this to keep forever? I promise the by line will contain your real name. Susan |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I would be honored |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What infinite tenderness you convey here. It moved me too. Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Brad, Good one, enjoyed the read. |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Another good "Brad Majors"! In enjoy them all. Rf |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Beautiful longings. Deb |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Reminds me of me and Julie.  What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautifully written and so very much enjoyed. Take care Sue I am in motion |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo faithfully beautiful, sweet friend, that's the way love should be and you are bound to forever make your love so happy! (big hugggsssss) This is a special Valentines Day gift, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brad, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice writing Brad....James |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Brad~ What a gentle and loving write this is. Beautifully penned. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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