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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-02-12 02:31 PM



Travel thru morning
in a waking daze
that lasts hour upon hour
i use to focus
upon that which deserves
detailled attention
my morning memories
of you.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-02-12 02:36 PM


such times and such memories...can make the distance enjoyable...

nicely done

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2 posted 2003-02-12 02:38 PM






(sigh) I too always ramble to myself when I am waiting for a bus on strolling down the avenue in public, it just seems to come out of te haze and it is both a gift and curse I find! (big hugggsssss) This is touching, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2003-02-12 02:40 PM


Gemma, we really  need  those sweet memories of
him for when we're not with him, don't we?
.
.
In case you don't read the comment to your reply on my poem,
I really have missed you, friend. Try not to stay away
so long next time you have tests or something, even
if you just pop in for a minute to tell us hello...Okay, Lady.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2003-02-12 03:53 PM


gemjop - I love the morning, and those tender memories...

BC

Brad Majors
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5 posted 2003-02-12 04:08 PM


I thought I was the only one who did this
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-02-12 04:26 PM


Thoughts like those can keep you warm for a long time!

Warm hugs,
EA

gemjop
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7 posted 2003-02-12 05:17 PM


thanks for your replies!!!i do appreciate them so much.yep, the memories are great to rewind. the amount of time i spend on the bus(grrrr),i spend a lot of time drifting off into my little world, and always the same subject matter...the love of my life. sigh...i love love!

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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