Open Poetry #24 |
What is a Friend? |
Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
What is a friend I said to the darkness but no answer did the darkness speak the dark a void that I myself could never fill a wall, a tower that had shown no hope I wandered along alone and scared for I am afraid of the dark then a shimmering light illuminated the night and came closer till I could feel the candle's heat against my face then I knew for once I was not alone we havestumbled on together helping each other to find the way now the room seems to brighten with each passing day you have brought light to part of my heart where darkness lived before you are more special then you'll ever know for you have stolen a part of my heart forever more So now when I ask what is a friend I know you were the one my heart was longing for. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
It is always so nice to find a friend in the darkness. Come to me and wipe the darkness from my eyes Come, and bind me with your friendship ties Susan C. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Friendship is a treasure not to be missed and such pleasure to give as well as recieve |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really liked this. it is always important to have friends. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
yes it is |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
By the way did you get my email the other day? Susan |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
no send another one to [email protected] and I'll be happily waiting for it |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
I loved this a good friend is hard find i thank God for everyone of mine always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
EEEK, did I lose you? |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
no why? |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
The silence. I think your email sucks by the way. [email protected] (that's a zero after the "s") |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
lol |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a beautiful poem, Brad. *s M |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Brad, this is a beautiful poem, and we all need friends, don't we? "Love makes the world go around" |
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