Open Poetry #24 |
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Wishing For |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Carefully Tossing pennies in the well, Makes wishes ~From soft dreams, With no one around to tell; Closing eyes ~As they fall Lightly splashing far below, Look to clouds ~Drifting off To the land where warm winds blow, Gracefully ~Sprouting wings Follows the clouds as they go, Rising up ~Greets the sky Feels the warming of the sun Gone from sight ~Wishing well As the spell becomes undone, Fluffy cloud ~Drifting south Notices not the wishes fell. Gloom |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Even when you are softer than light, still, you rim the glass with acrid truth... as is your way, and always a pleasure to read... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Professor, I love the sound of penny splashes. Maybe cause I know they hit their mark and there is a bottom, afterall. Enjoyed this. But I think a wish made is a wish in the works, riding on the wind until granted, one way or the other, sooner and sometimes, very much later. Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I always loved making wishes in those wells. Nicely done Prof. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I, too, like to make wishes. You described so well. I enjoyed reading... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thought-provoking....I enjoyed this Gloom |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I really like this. Good imagery as well as excellent poetry. Deb |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I am still waiting for my wish. Good piece |
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