Open Poetry #24 |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I miss you please ignore me you know how I can get it’s just another of those nights when I am barely fit for conversation or company no matter the intention I’m determined to be sinsick you my indiscretion [This message has been edited by Duncan (02-12-2003 01:13 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTFL. Actually, I'm still laughing at your reply to Raph's YaddaBlahBlahBlah. You guys are so funny. But I really am sorry that LOVE didn't fulfill you, only tempt you. And yes, I am still fasting. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Duncan, the title is awesome! i wish i had thought of it myself. I also like how your title fits the content in your last stanza |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice one |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) I too have these side effects and know them all too well, I want to keep my sanity but find bliss all the same as I rarely have tasted it yet! (big hugggsssssss) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
I'll have to remember this...when I'm having one of those days. Very well said...indeed ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very good, Duncan. I enjoyed reading... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
it’s just another of those nights when I am barely fit for conversation or company no matter the intention I’m determined to be sinsick you my indiscretion ================================ yeppers ... know the feeling well... its called "moth miserable in your own skin" the slooooow burn of an old ache.... Dunc...were gonna make ya an offical male moth yet classic Duncan poetry...and thats a very good thing |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh...and about the rhyme? does this mean Im rubbing off on you lmao |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yeah, JM's rubbing off... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Duncan... tight..rhymed and that hint of cutting self appraisal that sometimes leads us to not like the reflections.... well done... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Duncan - another one of those nights, geez do I know them at times... BC |
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