Open Poetry #24 |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I miss you please ignore me you know how I can get it’s just another of those nights when I am barely fit for conversation or company no matter the intention I’m determined to be sinsick you my indiscretion [This message has been edited by Duncan (02-12-2003 01:13 AM).] |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTFL. Actually, I'm still laughing at your reply to Raph's YaddaBlahBlahBlah. You guys are so funny. But I really am sorry that LOVE didn't fulfill you, only tempt you. And yes, I am still fasting. |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Duncan, the title is awesome! i wish i had thought of it myself. I also like how your title fits the content in your last stanza |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) I too have these side effects and know them all too well, I want to keep my sanity but find bliss all the same as I rarely have tasted it yet! (big hugggsssssss) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
I'll have to remember this...when I'm having one of those days. Very well said...indeed ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very good, Duncan. I enjoyed reading... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
it’s just another of those nights when I am barely fit for conversation or company no matter the intention I’m determined to be sinsick you my indiscretion ================================ yeppers ... know the feeling well... its called "moth miserable in your own skin" the slooooow burn of an old ache.... Dunc...were gonna make ya an offical male moth yet ![]() classic Duncan poetry...and thats a very good thing ![]() |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh...and about the rhyme? does this mean Im rubbing off on you ![]() ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yeah, JM's rubbing off... ![]() |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Duncan... tight..rhymed and that hint of cutting self appraisal that sometimes leads us to not like the reflections.... well done... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Duncan - another one of those nights, geez do I know them at times... BC |
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