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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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~~~~~ Even if.... you didn't have the most beautiful soft, brown eyes I have ever seen I would still love to gaze into them and see your love for me Or even if.... you didn't have strong arms and shoulders for me to lean upon I would still want you to wrap them around me and hold me close And even if.... your lips were not the sweetest taste on this earth I would still want them upon mine in passionate kisses Even if.... you were not the best dancer in the world with your smooth moves and turns I would still want you to hold me close as we walk down this path of life Or even if.... you didn't have a sweet, husky, sexy voice I would still want you to whisper the sweet words you say into my ear "I love you, baby" Even if you didn't have all these qualities, and more, I would still love you, because You would still be YOU ~~~~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-12-2003 01:10 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
now there is a valentine's day poem for the one you care about... enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang woman! You need to get into writing those Hallmark cards! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Capt. Ron, thank you. I appreciate that. I hope he likes it...But, I know he will, because he loves me "even if...", too.  "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-11-2003 12:51 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
AAWWW, Dixie, that was sweet to say. Thank you, friend....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ethel, Well, ~even if~ you never write another love poem, heaven forbid! this one could last a lifetime. Truly one of your best. Enjoyed! Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl You convinced me. LOL Nice one. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel, does Gary know about this man? tehe! Just joking Gary! We all know who "You" is! She has made you a household name---and has every woman who reads her poetry, wanting a clone of "you"! Ethel, no wonder he loves you so much! You appreciate him on all levels!--and from the sounds of it--he deserves it! Happy Valentine's day to you both! Linda |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
Even if...  loved this poem hugs, kelly |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
garysgirl - most lovely write for your sweetheart... BC |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ah, you write the very meaning of love....very very nice ....sigh |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
real sweet in the valentine mood, i see |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles) Awwwwwwww, this is so sweet and gorgeous, sweet friend, I sure don't have those strong arms, I have small hands and am kind of puny, hehehe, but I believe I have the qualities of being a faithful lover to my drea girl in the future and I don't care if she's not a model or actress or Miss Universe, because inner-beauty atters and I want to love a girl to the heart! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Nicely PUt Girl!!!! giving that to anyone??? I have sure missed reading you guys..since I've went to work. I try to drop in when I get the chance...and it was well worth the drop today *S* Happy Valentines day to U and Gary |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Wow, another about a lucky guy!!Nice write |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
very nice........now this is a valentine poem. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh yes, Pat... "Heaven forbid" that I never write another love poem......lol I think I've got Gary used to them now, so I guess I'm just gonna have to keep on...since I hate writing them so bad......NOT!! LOL Seriously, I love writing these poems to him. Every one of them comes straight from my heart... . Thank you, friend...... Ethel . . (BTW, did I tell you that I love the site that you told me about?) [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-12-2003 02:11 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, glad you liked it... Glad that I "convinced" you, too...LOL Thank you.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda.....HeeHee...I think that Gary knows about this man I'm always writing poetry about...  Yep, Gary really is aware of how much I love him, just as I'm aware of how much he loves me, too. And, uh-huh...I appreciate him on ALL levels!! And, oh yeah..he deserves every ounce of appreciation that he gets. Happy Valentine's to you, too, sweet Lady. [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-12-2003 02:25 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Kelly.... I'm really glad that you liked it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, thank you. I love reading your poems, too... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jellybeans...thank you. That was sweet of you to say... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michelle, I think that Gary and I stay in the Valentine mood...lol "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, you're right...it what's on the inside that counts. And my Gary's got it on the inside, too..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Salty girl  Yeah, I think I might give it to someone...LOL It's really good to see you. I've been missing you, too. I wondered where you were. I'm glad that you dropped in today and hope you can drop in more often... Happy Valentine's to you and your Love, too!!  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dennis, Thank you... And yes, we both feel very lucky... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lisann, I'm glad that you like it. That was a sweet thing to say. I really appreciate it... "Love makes the world go around" |
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