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0 posted 2003-02-11 12:42 PM


~~~~~
Even if....
you didn't have the most beautiful
soft, brown eyes I have ever seen
I would still love to gaze into them
and see your love for me

Or even if....
you didn't have strong arms
and shoulders for me to lean upon
I would still want you to wrap them
around me and hold me close

And even if....
your lips were not the sweetest
taste on this earth
I would still want them upon mine
in passionate kisses

Even if....
you were not the best dancer in the world
with your smooth moves and turns
I would still want you to hold me close
as we walk down this path of life

Or even if....
you didn't have a sweet, husky, sexy voice
I would still want you to whisper
the sweet words you say into my ear
"I love you, baby"

Even if you didn't have all these qualities, and more,
I would still love you, because
You would still be YOU
~~~~~





[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-12-2003 01:10 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-02-11 12:44 PM


now there is a valentine's day poem for the one you care about... enjoyed
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2 posted 2003-02-11 12:47 PM


dang woman! You need to get into writing those Hallmark cards!
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3 posted 2003-02-11 12:50 PM


Capt. Ron, thank you. I appreciate that.
I hope he likes it...But, I know he will, because he loves me "even if...", too.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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4 posted 2003-02-11 12:51 PM


AAWWW, Dixie,
that was sweet to say. Thank you, friend....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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5 posted 2003-02-11 01:27 PM




Ethel,

Well,  ~even if~ you never write another love poem, heaven forbid!
this one could last a lifetime.

Truly one of your best. Enjoyed!

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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6 posted 2003-02-11 01:52 PM


garysgirl
You convinced me. LOL Nice one.

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7 posted 2003-02-11 02:27 PM


Ethel, does Gary know about this man?

tehe! Just joking Gary! We all know who "You" is! She has made you a household name---and has every woman who reads her poetry, wanting a clone of "you"!

Ethel, no wonder he loves you so much! You appreciate him on all levels!--and from the sounds of it--he deserves it!

Happy Valentine's day to you both!

Linda

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8 posted 2003-02-11 02:45 PM


Even if...

loved this poem

hugs, kelly

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9 posted 2003-02-11 02:50 PM


garysgirl - most lovely write for your sweetheart...

BC

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10 posted 2003-02-11 02:53 PM


ah, you write the very meaning of love....very very nice ....sigh
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11 posted 2003-02-11 07:16 PM



real sweet in the valentine mood, i see

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12 posted 2003-02-12 01:30 AM




(giggles) Awwwwwwww, this is so sweet and gorgeous, sweet friend, I sure don't have those strong arms, I have small hands and am kind of puny, hehehe, but I believe I have the qualities of being a faithful lover to my drea girl in the future and I don't care if she's not a model or actress or Miss Universe, because inner-beauty atters and I want to love a girl to the heart! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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13 posted 2003-02-12 01:35 AM


Nicely PUt Girl!!!!   giving that to anyone???  


I have sure missed reading you guys..since I've went to work.  I try to drop in when I get the chance...and it was well worth the drop today  *S*

Happy Valentines day to U and Gary

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14 posted 2003-02-12 01:45 AM


Wow, another about a lucky guy!!Nice write
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15 posted 2003-02-12 01:55 AM


very nice........now this is a valentine poem.  
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16 posted 2003-02-12 02:09 AM


Oh yes, Pat...
"Heaven forbid" that I never write another love poem......lol
I think I've got Gary used to them now, so I guess
I'm just gonna have to keep on...since I hate writing
them so bad......NOT!!  LOL
Seriously, I love writing these poems to him. Every
one of them comes straight from my heart...

.
Thank you, friend......
Ethel
.
.


(BTW, did I tell you that I love the site that you told me about?)

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17 posted 2003-02-12 02:14 AM


Seymour, glad you liked it...
Glad that I "convinced" you, too...LOL
Thank you....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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18 posted 2003-02-12 02:24 AM


Linda.....HeeHee...I think  that Gary knows about
this man I'm always writing poetry about...

Yep, Gary really is aware of how much I love him, just as I'm aware of how much he loves me, too. And, uh-huh...I appreciate him on   ALL  levels!! And, oh yeah..he deserves every ounce of appreciation that he gets.

Happy Valentine's to you, too, sweet Lady.

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19 posted 2003-02-12 02:26 AM


Thank you, Kelly....
I'm really glad that you liked it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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20 posted 2003-02-12 02:29 AM


Bill, thank you. I love reading your
poems, too...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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21 posted 2003-02-12 02:31 AM


Jellybeans...thank you.
That was sweet of you to say...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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22 posted 2003-02-12 02:32 AM


Michelle,
I think that Gary and I stay in the Valentine mood...lol  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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23 posted 2003-02-12 02:34 AM


Noah, you're right...it what's on the inside that counts.
And my Gary's got it on the inside, too.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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24 posted 2003-02-12 02:40 AM


Hi Salty girl  
Yeah, I think I might give it to someone...LOL

It's really good to see you. I've been
missing you, too. I wondered where you were.
I'm glad that you dropped in today and hope
you can drop in more often...

Happy Valentine's to you and your Love, too!!

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25 posted 2003-02-12 02:41 AM


Dennis,
Thank you...
And yes, we both feel very lucky...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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26 posted 2003-02-12 02:42 AM


Lisann, I'm glad that you like it. That was a sweet thing to say.
I really appreciate it...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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