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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-02-11 09:46 AM



“CAPTIVATED BY YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Sometimes when I see the
whiteness of clouds
overhead, and the snow
floats mystically upon me,
you appear
from out of the mist
before my eyes…

An embrace once known
before is with desire
yet tender with
you, fires burn inside
me for your
fingers gentle upon
me, tracing as you do
with your loving
touch…

My emptiness is filled
with you, my chill
is warmed, as I close
my eyes
captivated by you…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-11 09:50 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is lovely, sweet friend, love is so captivating and I can only begin to envision that undertow sweeping me away! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Robert Frazier
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2 posted 2003-02-11 10:00 AM


Bill,  You are an elite romantic!
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2003-02-11 10:13 AM


Captivatingly beautiful Bill...
regards2you
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4 posted 2003-02-11 10:48 AM




Bill,

Warm, romantic thoughts which you write so well.


Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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5 posted 2003-02-11 10:52 AM


Bill, very sweet, tender, and romantic....
just like the writer, I'm sure...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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6 posted 2003-02-11 11:22 AM


as the snow floats, and through the mist.....this is charming sir.....as lovely as the feelings.....


Lauren~

I sing to life
To it's tragic beauty
To pain and strife
Let all that dances through me
The rise and the fall, I lived through it all

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