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smilinmike New Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 5 |
PLEASE Bring me air from the mountains The wishes from all the worlds fountains Bring me rainbows and sunsets Show me how big the moon gets Salt air and dolphin kisses Little kittin hisses Save all the winning bets for me For you see I can barely breathe Bring me Leaves from Arbutus trees Soft lips that tease Bring me all the kind things you can gather Please Patter pitter My light grows dimmer Bring me white roses Love thrown down in proses That a woman who loves me composes My list is hard I know this Bring them all too me It's getting hard to see Please Bring me a swans song Nights long Bring me the smell of a summer lawn Butterflies with all their colors on Don't be too long Be brave When you have gotten all that you've saved Please place them here By my grave And pray |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A very forlorn writing, Mike. All of the pleasures of a lifetime, wrapped up in one poem. Welcome to Passions! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"Butterflies with all their colors on" love the thought you have a long list of beautiful thoughts...I would like some of it too.. M |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Mike, your smiles will be welcome here indeed... This is a wonderful piece - Show me more??...  |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Mike, ~Welcome to Passions~ A wonderful poem. Can't wait to read more of your work. You will find as you read others, all the beautiful lines and images included in your poem will show up here in theirs, too. Too many great lines to quote but I, too liked the butterfly line. Thank you for sharing this with us. I really do look forward to more of your poetry. So talented, you. Enjoyed, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very pretty piece looking forward to more from you |
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