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Krissy
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0 posted 2003-02-10 03:04 PM


Valintine


I walk alone in
The park and see
Couples holding hands and
I think to myself
I wish I could
Have someone like that

When I walk along
The streets seeing people
Talking, smiling and being
Happy I just think
That I am lucky
That I have someone

That really cares for
Me and loves me
Happy Valintine's

krissy


And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

© Copyright 2003 Krissy P J Searle - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-10 03:26 PM


Beautiful poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Aimster
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2 posted 2003-02-10 11:46 PM


Krissy,

beautiful poem! and happy valentine's day
to you as well. hope your doing good.
take care.
love you.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Brad Majors
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3 posted 2003-02-14 10:05 AM


Beautiful piece on this day
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4 posted 2003-02-14 10:17 AM


Happy Valentine's Day, Krissy... this is lovely. *S*
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-02-14 11:15 AM


This is so fresh, tender and sweet. It makes me !

Warm hugs and valentine wishes,
Earth Angel

Albert J. Allie
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6 posted 2003-02-14 11:57 AM


Love is truely the answer and cure for whatever ails you! Wonderfully done Krissy! ((HHHHUUUGGGSS))
HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!

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7 posted 2003-02-14 12:08 PM


nice write...

Happy Valentine's Day!

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8 posted 2003-02-14 12:43 PM












(smiles) Awwwwwww, here's some big Valentine bear hugs just for you:



(sigh) This is so beautiful, sweet friend, and we are all happy for you and know love is always bound to touch your heart, yay, we all love you so much, and...



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton










"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2003-02-14 09:29 PM


Hi, Krissy!!!! Good to see you around!

You don't fool me. I'm sure you've got men on their knees over there 'cause you're super!!

(...if only you could spell valentine )

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