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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-02-10 04:46 AM


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Closing my eyes in sleep
I feel your presence around me
Between the realm of dreams and reality

There is a touch, ever so lightly
A caress,
softly, tenderly, lovingly

As I'm into sleep,
falling
I can feel your breath gently
in my ear, my name you're
calling

Very softly you say
I love you,
With words so tender you speak
And with the touch of your hand
you very, very gently seek

With such passion and love
in your voice I hear
With longing and desire
you nibble on my ear

As I drift slowly into sleep
your handsome face I see
With deep brown eyes
gazing lovingly at me
And I hear you whisper

"Sleep, my Love...
for I'm right here
Just feel and you'll see
together we are, for I'm always near"

I then sleep soundly and peacefully
as your presence I feel
With your arms holding me tightly
I lay beside you, very still
When I finally let myself awake
counting the hours, I start
For the day is almost here
when I will feel the beat of your heart




© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-10 09:08 AM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Ethel, these gorgeous words of love made me cry as I've dreamt for over five years of holding a girls hand and feeling her smile and wanting ever so much to have someone to love! (sigh) I just want to make a girl feel special and make some of her dreams come true, this is gorgeous, know you and Gary will be together soon, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2003-02-10 09:08 AM


So beautiful Ethel..with a dream-like quality!
Very much enjoyed this Valentine for your love, Gary.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-02-10 09:12 AM


garysgirl
Now that's a dream, Enjoyed.

regards2you
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4 posted 2003-02-10 09:15 AM




Ethel,

Yes, that is a dream and glad it is a reality for you.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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5 posted 2003-02-10 04:30 PM


Wow...this is beautiful.
My favorite yet!
Eric

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6 posted 2003-02-10 05:16 PM


Gentle as a whisper, soft as a cloud, warm as sunshine, sweet as honey...

Warm hugs,

Linda

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7 posted 2003-02-10 05:56 PM


Beautifully written and so softly reassuring ...
Margherita

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8 posted 2003-02-11 07:06 AM


romantic and sweet, but deep too, the feel of someones pulse on your life, very nice ethel..will you see him on Valentines DAy?

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-11-2003 07:07 AM).]

Corinne
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9 posted 2003-02-11 04:48 PM


What wonderful anticipation!

Cor

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10 posted 2003-02-11 06:28 PM


Very romantic!

Deb

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