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ShadowRider
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0 posted 2003-02-09 09:22 PM




      The Left Behind (for Marsha)

  the mark of remembrance
     on your face, so clearly shows this solemn garment
     the Left Behind
impenetrable path that may as well be heaven-scratched castles
     this is the sealed tribute of valiant bonds
     a scroll that tribunes cannot read
     written in the blood of souls, read by spirit lips

  Stand fast!  for the wind may not be caught
     and exasperation is the reward for trying
  Be envious of your times together
     never forget, never forsake vows made under unctuous arch
  love is a precious fortune of brief humilities:
     of great men it has made suffer like a pestilence
  and queens avow the pangs of ill fortune
     helpless are they that contemplate a challenge of fate

  and when the sword finally cleaves
     feed the beast no more
  for eternity we become the observers
     - the Left Behind -
     raging against occupying the unliving throne
   for a demise does not perish once
     but once for each life it has touched
   multiplied by a factor of love
     it is then, for those left behind
     to keep them alive within us -
         close in heart
          evermore


(staying at Passions long enough to wish one of God's kindest souls, my own heart of sympathy
Jeff)


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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2003-02-09 09:24 PM


ShadowRider - words written that I could not, thank you Jeff. Marsha will know of them...

BC

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2 posted 2003-02-09 09:27 PM


Jeff...you have the kindest soul.
Marsha will appreciate this so much.
Be well...be safe.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-02-10 12:23 PM




(big hugggsssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I too send angel hugs out to this special friend as I know she will rise again and be happier and stronger than ever as your sympathy truly is a spoonful of sugar to her heart! (sigh) This is precious, sweet friend, I knew you'd come back and so happy you did, we all love you so much too! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeff, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-02-10 12:35 PM


When you return, you return in style.
What a wonderful thing you have done here, Jeff.

Robert Frazier
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5 posted 2003-02-10 12:50 PM


What an intensely personal and beautiful poem!  "Courageous" poetry, is what I call it!
passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-02-10 02:20 AM


very touching...geez, this got me really emotional...inspires me
Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2003-02-11 10:12 AM


I am so very glad that I did not miss this Jeff.......but I will miss your words.  Be well my friend, keep in touch..
garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-02-11 10:58 AM


Jeff, you are so tender-hearted and compassionate...
It shows very clearly in your words.
.
.
I will miss seeing you and your words, and hope that you come back very often....that is, if you've got to leave??...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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9 posted 2003-02-11 11:01 AM


ShadowRider~
Gently spoken .... and our Marsha deserves the softness of your thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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