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December Rain
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December Rain |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Just a mist, Barely wetting things, Too warm for a December, Feels slightly like spring, Just a mist. Black piles of snow remember It was a few days ago When the sky was filled with snow, With cold shivers of winter, I felt like going shopping, Driving in it mall hopping, Then it fell like December. Drenching rains Melt the last of snows Pooling in the clogged gutters, Nowhere left to go, Drenching rains. The walkways become rivers, Floods fly from cars in passing Push pools to waves of splashing Snow chilled is the street water, Wet shivers from the drenching, In muted tones of cursing Onward still goes the walker. The cars go Wipers slapping time To songs of late December, Light thoughts on the mind The cars go. Gloom |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The cars go... our December is too warm... Octoberish... Christmas is months away, isn't it? Thank you Professor... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
like this Gloom...captures the mood as well as the climate..with thoughts or hints of deeper thought throughout. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
The mood can be felt in your words Prof...wipers keeping time.....yep..."Rudolph The Red Nose Reindeer...(flap-flap).... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Why, Professor, this was indeed, very descriptive writing! ~ May your Decembers be snowy and bright! warm holiday hugs, EA |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
'soggy cereal' christmas', ack. it's refreshing to read about something less perky for christmas. it'###### real and holds tones of truth. i enjoyed this. -chris. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
This is cool stuff Prof. That hint of winter that drops ...and leaves you looking for the signs of the season. Kind of teased there for day or so huh? You captured the decaf drifts of West Texas also. Nice work~ ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you must be in Florida? hehehe, I was out in shorts washing the car the other night and the next night I was in my thermals with the heater blasting...funny. anyhow, good write. [This message has been edited by passing shadows (12-20-2002 03:45 PM).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Enjoyed this Prof... *~coco~* |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Wow. Another uniquely you poem. I think you're smiling sometimes Gloomy. I know this made me smile.  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Gloom - I like this!! But, I don't like the December rains if and when we get them. Everything looks so dirty and sad. What an enjoyable poem this was to read. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Prof. I missed this one before, but glad I caught this time around. I love the descriptive way you wrote this. Even though the sun's shining here in Florida, it seemed I could almost hear the rain.......  "Love makes the world go around" |
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