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Your Touch
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Your Touch |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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~ By Sue ~ Your soft tender touch Is what I remember most Warming up my heart The passion did grow As I felt your gentle hands Holding me so close I could feel your heart Beating even faster then As you held me too Who will hold me now To warm my heart like you did Now that you are gone Making passion grow One I had not felt before Until I met you 2-8-03 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice Sue. You do well with these short verses.  M |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You describe the touch...perfectly. Great job! Eric |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
A sweet touch!!! Neeraja |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully done Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
No doubt that touch was magical. Beautifully said. Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Often, spoken through the fingertips are volumes never uttered by the lips. ThisDiamond |
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