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Open Poetry #24

"Do you fly"

shannon harter
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since 2003-02-03

Posts 31
waesaw,IN USA

0 posted 2003-02-09 01:48 AM

"Do you fly"

do you cry
over me
your loss upon loses thrust into the nightly black sea?

do you lie, up at night, thinking of wrongs,to change them right?

or do you fly
far away

hoping to miss the penance

hoping to miss each passing day

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-02-09 01:49 AM

good question...

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

2 posted 2003-02-09 01:57 AM

more ike an indictment.
nice bit.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

3 posted 2003-02-09 10:05 AM

sometimes we wallow
sometimes we fly
often we
are simply
asleep

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-02-09 06:16 PM

Beautiful poem.
Eric

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-02-09 06:17 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

6 posted 2003-02-09 09:57 PM

Flying is for birds..and angels..and if God wanted me to fly I'd be one of those!! LOL I'm afraid of heights....but I like your poem!

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