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Holding On
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Holding On |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Holding On (in memory of Michelle) Holding on to you this healing takes me past the rim that I fell over to float through time that caught you with childhood blooming all around to storm of it in somersault Now fair wings wrap me I am feathered in this flight not falling and a light fastens time with a seat belt sure and true made by mostly me and some of you |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Martie - my best to you Martie, as always... BC |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Martie, this is so tender and lovely. (((HUGS))) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie This flew the coop, more then lovely.  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
....sigh.... .......you do it every time, touch nerves every time..... Thank you. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martie, so beautiful and tender..... Heart hugs to you.....  Ethel  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
She would surely love this expression of love...Very tenderly said... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Martie, this is so sad. Sending hugs to you.  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Now fair wings wrap me I am feathered in this flight not falling' Made me think of coming to a place where it's easier to remember... |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
while walking around the cemetery (Acacia) we happened upon a stone. It was really rather vague. Said a young girl had died somewhere around the age of twelve... not the usual. but at the bottom appeared these words "remember me" I jotted down this senryu. a nameless stone where a wanton voice still cries Òremember meÓ love & caring, dale PS could you write us a note and tell me "is Marge OK. thanks" dale Speaking of ghosts, and after such an eternity. . .wouldn't you know, here comes mine again... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Holding on to you this healing takes me past the rim that I fell over to float through time that caught you with childhood blooming all around ---------------------------- Now fair wings wrap me I am feathered in this flight not falling and a light fastens time ----------------------------   |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, as always I send angel hugs out to you in comfort to you and to bring healing to your heart, as I know Michelle will never forget you and always be singing in your heart and guiding you with her love! (sigh) This is precious, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Martie, I so loved the butterfly from Janet Marie...what a beautiful picture to compliment your warm and loving write. A sob caught in my heart because I know what it takes to stand. Hugs to you. TD |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Now fair wings wrap me I am feathered in this flight not falling and a light fastens time Martie, your memories are so dear. I love the special hold that keeps Michelle so close to you. But like you have said, you look forward to this time as much as you dread it. That to me encompasses her memory with the warmest kind of love enfolded in your arms that is ever near in spirit. hugging you Martie~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (02-09-2003 12:14 AM).] |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
very nice write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
this was lovely always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Martie, again your poetry moves me.  [This message has been edited by sigheyes (02-09-2003 11:11 AM).] |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - how clearly we see Michelle through your loving words - her memory is so alive and will ever be as your words caress our hearts and minds with her memories - Paul |
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