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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Tumult I cooked a little broth this morn Ate it at the break of dawn. Watched the cold in amber hew Set aflame a sky of blue. Set back in my rocking chair Let my mind its magic share Walked the airs kaleidoscope And said a little prayer of hope. I often comment just to me Some of the things that I see And try to fit them with some wit A small philosophy of knit It helps with the things I do Especially the things with you It balances the weight of scale Especially the things I fail. Each morning brings the same result The tumult seems less difficult. |
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abbe Member
since 2003-01-20
Posts 131michigan, usa |
Good morning... i say you are off to a great start on this day! Not a failure here... and i enjoy your "wit" touched philosophies. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Here's hoping we get it right - eventually, yes???... G'Morning, Sy..  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan Get it right or die trying. LOL Good morning  abbe Good morning and thank you. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (02-08-2003 08:46 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Much enjoyed your Saturday morning post Sy! Chai tea this morning.... ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Caught me Watching like you, Musing as the sun comes Over a cool horizon, and... Rocking. Thanks for sharing. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"I often comment just to me Some of the things that I see" I see you are talking to yourself again...you know what they say hmmm I actually forgot what they say, a sign of age   M |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Good morning NIce poem to arise to Thank you for another gift Liz |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'I often comment just to me Some of the things that I see And try to fit them with some wit A small philosophy of knit It helps with the things I do Especially the things with you It balances the weight of scale Especially the things I fail.' Love these verses Sy. A familiar morning... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I never would have thought that you fail at anything. Especially with your poetry. I love to reads your poems. Even though I may not reply very often, I always enjoy reading them. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Good morning dear tea will be fine. Ratleader Nice to have friends, thank you. Maureen, Don't think it's age with you. "kiss: Elizabeth, Any morning you wake up is a good morning. Thank you Top of the morning to you Duncan. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick It's the same with me, I can't answer all the poem I read. Have a good day. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goodmorning Mr. Seymour...  It's good to see you again this cold morning... with your breath of fresh air..... just beautiful and warm, as always..... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
As I sometimes say...."Sometimes peanuts, sometimes shells"... good thoughts here Sy. and so true. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed the early morning write here in my late morning |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus What you say is true, not every shell holds a peanut. passing shadows Enjoyed the late morning comment. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I cooked a little broth this morn Ate it at the break of dawn. Watched the cold in amber hew Set aflame a sky of blue. Set back in my rocking chair Let my mind its magic share Walked the airs kaleidoscope And said a little prayer of hope. ================================= The moth is running late... so sorry to make you wait. Either my computer caught a cold, or my server is feeling old. I couldnt get on line to read your rhymes sublime. I missed our morning tea... heck its nearly three!! So here I am at last ... and if the moment hasnt passed, Im leaving Tinker smooches and winkies for dandy Randy and my Sy-guy Stinky. *ww* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Seymour, this is lovely, sweet friend, I believe the morning is a time of quintessence and there the tumult from the nightmares or anxieties we may feel dissolve in the rest! (big hugggssssss) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I did miss you but I knew you would catch me some time today. Love the smooches and winkies and send some back. WWRS Noah, Thank you for the read and always enjoy your comments. |
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