Open Poetry #24 |
Yeah, Sure! |
pjtalty Member
since 2002-07-17
Posts 111W.A., Australia |
Yeah, sure! Politicians never lie; Yeah sure! And pigs might even fly. Yeah, sure! The thought that greed is good still lingers. Excuse me, please, I've got to cross my fingers!! Yeah, sure! We know that war's the best solution To keep oil flowing (and increase pollution!). Oh reader, please forgive, it's not like me to cry; It's just my sense that pigs will never fly! Patrick Talty |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, except the reality thoughts that triggered this aren't at all funny. Jimmy Buffett sang the truth though: "If we couldn't laugh we would all go insane" I'm going to take my daughter horseback riding today, drink a beer tonight, and write some poetry if my muse is in a cooperative mood. (and I think I'll stick around on this planet until I get to see a pig fly by!!!) |
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pjtalty Member
since 2002-07-17
Posts 111W.A., Australia |
Midnitesun, Thanks for reading and commenting on my short verse, *Yeah!Sure!* I, too, am an optimist; it's what keeps me alive and kicking. Where there's optimism there's hope, I believe. However, sometimes reality sets in and I get myslf back on track by getting in touch with my deeper feelings and jotting down stuff like this poem that sometimes comes out as part humourous, part rebellious. I appreciate your comments and sentiments and wish you and your family long and happy lives. Who knows, you may even get to see pigs flying. Patrick Talty [This message has been edited by pjtalty (02-08-2003 11:06 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hehehe...good write! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow....poetry, humor and a plea for peace. Great job! Eric |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
LMAO this is a really good and true poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I honestly liked this,for a lite piece,even if my politics are in opposite direction.I am a realist and if they want peace,then thier actions will demand it.And if we are wrong,then so goes the luck of the strong.I am personally ok with cashing in 300k lives today,to save 3 million lives tomorrow.but then........i am a jaded soul |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good one! ...and I do believe I just saw a pig fly by my open window! Valentine hugs, EA |
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