Open Poetry #24 |
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My Heart |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown ![]() |
~ By Sue ~ His heart he would not open To allow me to enter The love I held for him He never would accept Seems he always pushed it away It was hard for me to understand I could not have loved anyone better Than I had loved him I had never known anyone Who did not want to be loved To open up my heart again I do not think I can ever do My heart I had given to him How do I take it back When my heart belonged to him I just wish I could understand Now I feel so dead inside Like I have no feelings at all 2-7-03 |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sue I do know and understand these feelings, and I am convinced that the answer comes with time. Hugs to you. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Think of your heart as napping, it just needs time to recover and find it's beat again. And it will! Soon, I hope! |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, this makes me hurt for you. It's so sad. But, you wrote the poem beautifully. I like the font, too. ![]() |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it starts when you learn to love yourself first...*big hugs* |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Your wound is still open.. It will heal in time, Sue... ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sue, It won't be easy but time does heal all things. Good write. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Just napping, I like Lori's response, Sue. hugs M |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
oh boy do i know this pain. Loving someone and not having it returned is a pain I do not wish on anyone. I wish there was something I could do to take away your pain dear but unfortunately....we aren't able to do that for one another. I know the saying that time heals all wounds......I think that may have been said by someone that hasn't actually experienced this kind of pain before. I don't know what to say other than I am sorry for your pain....and I wish you the best. I do however believe that when you find Love.....real love.....it is definitely worth the wait. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
The pain will heal in time Sue.. And you will go on and love again.. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Thank you all for your replies. Some days are good, and some are not. This is one of those days when it isn't very good. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, I feel that too |
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