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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2003-02-07 11:17 PM



Conundrum
Prices rocket
in petroleum
Emanating war
The tube sees
a rise in passengers
Level orange heats it up
Bomb on the train
Headed for disaster
Strange mixture
Pouring death




[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (02-08-2003 12:26 AM).]

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Gaia
1 posted 2003-02-08 09:50 AM


A deadly mixture of wants and deeds.
We want the very fuel that fuels our doom.
  wishing you PEACE

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2 posted 2003-02-08 10:16 AM


Conundrum

Hatred,
Now a more.
Fear comes with the groceries.
Are we saved by, and from, rockets'
Red glare?

Nicely done, my friend. Thank you.

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Ericc
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3 posted 2003-02-09 06:22 PM


Very insightful commentary.
Thank you.
Eric

the_loner_23
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4 posted 2003-02-09 06:23 PM


Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Jason Lyle
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5 posted 2003-02-09 06:45 PM


Well said.
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6 posted 2003-02-09 09:30 PM


How many barrels of oil egual one dead American?

paladin

....a knight without armor

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7 posted 2003-02-09 10:37 PM


Depends on who gets the oil. In some places you can save the oil, cuz they'll kill him for nothing.
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displaced
8 posted 2003-02-10 02:54 AM


you got me thinking
Nan
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9 posted 2003-02-10 07:42 AM


Life is such a dilemma at times, eh walt?... You're just the guy to make us think about it too...
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10 posted 2003-02-10 08:29 AM



Simple statements conveying a powerful message!

Peace and love,
Earth Angel

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