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carol
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0 posted 2003-02-07 10:53 PM


I had promised myself i would never love again
But one look into your dark eyes sent my heart into a spin

Just the very touch of your hand holding my hand
Had me so much under your power i could not stand

When i look into your soft eyes it sends over me a chill
It makes my body feel such a really deep thrill

I know with you my love i will never feel alone
As our hearts seems to beat together in the same tone

I am so happy with the love of my life by my side
With you walking next to me gives me so much pride

You are my husband,my lover and my friend all wrapped into one
I want you to know my love my heart you have forever won

© Copyright 2003 Rita C Burkett - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2003-02-07 10:56 PM


aint love grand?! this is wonderful
Whispered Name
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2 posted 2003-02-07 10:58 PM


Great poem but it seems a little stressed in a few places.
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3 posted 2003-02-08 12:44 PM



Rita, this is a beautiful poem to your Honey.
I know he's going to like it.

Yep, Gary loves my love poems to him and I know
his Dad will love your love poems to him, too.
They are a lot alike, aren't they?


Oh, here's something to Gary's Mom and Dad from me and him......



We love ya'll....
Ethel and Gary....

carol
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4 posted 2003-02-08 12:51 PM


SEA, yes love is grand, thanks for the comment

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita

carol
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5 posted 2003-02-08 12:52 PM


whispered name, Thanks for the comments

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita

[This message has been edited by carol (02-08-2003 12:52 AM).]

carol
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6 posted 2003-02-08 12:55 PM


Ethel, thanks, yes Gary and his dad is a lot alike,we love you and Gary too.

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita

vlraynes
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7 posted 2003-02-08 01:29 AM



carol~
This is so beautifully expressed.
I truly enjoyed the read.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

dhicks03
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8 posted 2003-02-08 01:56 AM


Very nice!!
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2003-02-08 02:53 AM


Really enjoyed this...James
carol
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10 posted 2003-02-08 10:38 PM


vickey,,Glad you liked it Thanks

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita


[This message has been edited by carol (02-08-2003 10:42 PM).]

carol
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11 posted 2003-02-08 10:40 PM


dhicks03,I glad you ejoyed Thanks

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita

carol
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12 posted 2003-02-08 10:42 PM


James Michael,I am glad you enjoyed thisThanks

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita

[This message has been edited by carol (02-08-2003 10:43 PM).]

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