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My Love |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
I had promised myself i would never love again But one look into your dark eyes sent my heart into a spin Just the very touch of your hand holding my hand Had me so much under your power i could not stand When i look into your soft eyes it sends over me a chill It makes my body feel such a really deep thrill I know with you my love i will never feel alone As our hearts seems to beat together in the same tone I am so happy with the love of my life by my side With you walking next to me gives me so much pride You are my husband,my lover and my friend all wrapped into one I want you to know my love my heart you have forever won |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 aint love grand?! this is wonderful  |
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Whispered Name New Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 4California, USA |
Great poem but it seems a little stressed in a few places. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rita, this is a beautiful poem to your Honey. I know he's going to like it.  Yep, Gary loves my love poems to him and I know his Dad will love your love poems to him, too. They are a lot alike, aren't they? Oh, here's something to Gary's Mom and Dad from me and him......  We love ya'll.... Ethel and Gary....  |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
SEA, yes love is grand, thanks for the comment always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
whispered name, Thanks for the comments always treat others the way you want to be treated Love from Rita [This message has been edited by carol (02-08-2003 12:52 AM).] |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Ethel, thanks, yes Gary and his dad is a lot alike,we love you and Gary too. always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
carol~ This is so beautifully expressed. I truly enjoyed the read. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Very nice!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Really enjoyed this...James |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
vickey,,Glad you liked it Thanks always treat others the way you want to be treated Love from Rita [This message has been edited by carol (02-08-2003 10:42 PM).] |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
dhicks03,I glad you ejoyed Thanks always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
James Michael,I am glad you enjoyed thisThanks always treat others the way you want to be treated Love from Rita [This message has been edited by carol (02-08-2003 10:43 PM).] |
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