Open Poetry #24 |
Softly, Ever So Softly |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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SOFTLY, EVER SO SOFTLY by Linda L. Dowd copyright 2003 ~*~ Softly, ever so softly, he came to me in the still of the night. His warm, moist breath breathed life into my being. Rose-scented, evening air wafted through my open window, filling me with a deep, inner calm. As he lie down beside me, he firmly drew my body close to his own. He held me in his strong arms, and my body flushed with burning desire for he and I to become as one. Stirrings of passion brought me beyond the boundaries of my normal waking hours as he explored all that is me. Limned by the light of the full moon, his magnificent form glistened from his eagerness to bring me pleasure. My breathing quickened with his caressing of both my body and my soul. With each loving, yet commanding, touch, I rose higher and higher... His manliness filled my senses as he explored my body with abandon, Embracing, thrusting, kissing, caressing... As our passions peaked, I quivered and I surrendered myself to him--completely. As we were swept away in a tidal wave of bliss, our pounding hearts were beating as one. No longer were we "he" and "I" ---There was only "us"... As he cradled me in his warm embrace, he whispered of his eternal love for me. I lay serenely in the effluence of his words, bathed in the afterglow of our loving... Such ecstasy is truly a spiritual experience ---the joining of a man and a woman, in rapturous harmony, as it is meant to be. ~*~ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (02-09-2003 10:43 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
beautiful Linda, and oh so true |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Raph ~ Thank you!--and from what I have read in some of your fine poetry, you truly do feel the same way as I do. A woman would be blessed to be with a man who feels as you do! Sending lots of loving and light, EA |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
oh wow... I am blushing here... this was -without question - very beautiful and romantic... Enjoyed BlueEyes |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Stop Linda, making me blush. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Can I keep this one, Linda? It is so beautiful, sensual, tender. Does he make housecalls, this love doctor of yours? Just kidding. I am so happy for you, you lucky lady! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Linda, Beautiful. You know, too often, in poems we have to say I hope this is not your experience. HA! Finally, I get to say I hope it is your experience. Lovely write. Enjoyed greatly. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
WOW, Linda....this one is . You knew I'd love this one, didn't you? And, you know who my images in my mind were of, too, don't you....HeeHee!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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BlueEyes ~ Seems like I might have managed to get my feelings across! tehe Thank you very much for your enthusiastic reply! May your life be full of love and loving! EA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Linda, this is so gorgeous, sweet friend, I dream ever so much of finally holding the hand of my dream girl if I ever do have one and making her feel special forever! (sigh) Yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Midnitesun ~ I am honored that you would like to "keep" this one. Please do--and read and enjoy it if ever you are alone on a long, cold, winter's night! tehe May your life always be filled with the glowing lights of loving--and being loved, EA |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Lovely read. Soft, yes Ed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Pat ~ Yes, this has been my blessed experience--I just wish the good doctor would prescribe this drug of choice on a daily basis! tehe May all the love that you give, be returned to you tenfold! Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (02-07-2003 01:33 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Ethel ~ Oh, yes, indeed! I did know you'd like this one, my little passion flower! May your flame keep on burning! Earthy Angel |
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Noah ~ Right this very moment, your dream girl is thinking the same thing about you! Wanting you and wondering where you are! Never fear my Dear One, Fate will one day bring you together! Sending you Valentine hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Ed ~ Thank ya kindly! I know that you know what I was saying in my poem!... Sending Valentine hugs, EA |
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Aenimal ~ We're both blushing! Valentine hugs, EA |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I'll sing bass...you sing tenor...in perfect harmony....this is beautiful...it reminds me of our night together last weekend....LOL |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Toe ~ Tra la la la la... P.S. A southern gentleman shouldn't kiss and tell! tsk tsk! Valentine hugs, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
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whew! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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passing shadows ~ "whew" was a very warm reply! Thank you! May the love that you deserve, find you! Warm hugs, EA |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I didn't tell a thing....call it "wishful" thinking or just an innocent "misleading"....LOL |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Toe, remember--"If you wish upon a star, your dreams come true"... Have your gray skies cleared up? If so, the stars may be out tonight down there in Alabama. Look up toward Orion and make your wish... |
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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
Such a powerfully romantic piece, nice to see something like this here, good job |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely done Linda.. As soft and gentle as a whisper.. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Linda - this is ever soft, but Linda, you promised me that you wouldn't tell... BC |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
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I am inspired to passion by this reading . . . (sigh) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Peter ~ Thank you! It sounds as though you must be a romanticist yourself! Love makes the world go 'round! Warm hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Nancy ~ Thank you for the compliment! I've learned from the best!--you! Warm hugs, Linda |
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BC ~ I just had to show the world that you "walk" your poetic "talk"!--and very well at that! tehe Valentine hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Robert ~ ...Oh, my! (Are you by yourself?!?) Valentine hugs, EA |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
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Damn.......gotta go find my hubby now..heheeheheheh......beautifully done. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I knew I would find you somewhere within these walls...and what a find it was!!! Very well done Linda.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Lisann ~ ...did you find him?!? I'm sure he would have enjoyed your early Valentine's Day gift! Warm hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Barry ~ Considering your phenomenal expertise at penning words to incite passion, I accept your kind words with the greatest humility--and appreciation! Thank you! Valentine hugs, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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very nice...I enjoyed this Linda |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
"Blushing" Well done! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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passing shadows ~ Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed! Warm hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Jason ~ ...that makes two of us! I suppose my poem exposes the earthy side of this "angel"! tehe Valentine hugs, Earth Angel |
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