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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-02-07 12:27 PM


SOFTLY, EVER SO SOFTLY
by
Linda L. Dowd
copyright 2003

~*~

Softly, ever so softly,
he came to me in the still of the night.
His warm, moist breath
breathed life into my being.
Rose-scented, evening air
wafted through my open window,
filling me with a deep, inner calm.
As he lie down beside me,
he firmly drew my body close to his own.
He held me in his strong arms,
and my body flushed with burning desire
for he and I to become as one.

Stirrings of passion brought me beyond
the boundaries of my normal waking hours as
he explored all that is me.
Limned by the light of the full moon,
his magnificent form glistened
from his eagerness to bring me pleasure.
My breathing quickened with his caressing of
both my body and my soul.
With each loving, yet commanding, touch,
I rose higher and higher...

His manliness filled my senses
as he explored my body with abandon,
Embracing, thrusting, kissing, caressing...
As our passions peaked, I quivered
and I surrendered myself to him--completely.
As we were swept away in a tidal wave of bliss,
our pounding hearts were beating as one.
No longer were we "he" and "I"
---There was only "us"...

As he cradled me in his warm embrace,
he whispered of his eternal love for me.
I lay serenely in the effluence of his words,
bathed in the afterglow of our loving...

Such ecstasy is truly a spiritual experience
---the joining of a man and a woman,
in rapturous harmony, as it is meant to be.

~*~


[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (02-09-2003 10:43 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Aenimal
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1 posted 2003-02-07 12:30 PM


beautiful Linda, and oh so true
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-02-07 12:40 PM


Raph ~

Thank you!--and from what I have read in some of your fine poetry, you truly do feel the same way as I do.

A woman would be blessed to be with a man who feels as you do!

Sending lots of loving and light,
EA

BlueEyes
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3 posted 2003-02-07 12:42 PM


oh wow... I am blushing here...
this was -without question - very beautiful and romantic...

Enjoyed

BlueEyes

Aenimal
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4 posted 2003-02-07 12:44 PM


Stop Linda, making me blush.
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5 posted 2003-02-07 12:47 PM


Can I keep this one, Linda?
It is so beautiful, sensual, tender.
Does he make housecalls, this love doctor of yours? Just kidding. I am so happy for you, you lucky lady!

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6 posted 2003-02-07 12:47 PM



Linda,

Beautiful.  You know, too often, in poems we have to say I hope this is not your experience. HA! Finally, I get to say I hope it is your experience. Lovely write. Enjoyed greatly.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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7 posted 2003-02-07 12:49 PM


WOW, Linda....this one is

.
You knew I'd love this one, didn't you?
And, you know who my images in my mind
were of, too, don't you....HeeHee!!


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8 posted 2003-02-07 12:49 PM


BlueEyes ~

Seems like I might have managed to get my feelings across! tehe  Thank you very much for your enthusiastic reply!

May your life be full of love and loving!
EA


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9 posted 2003-02-07 12:50 PM




(smiles) Oh Linda, this is so gorgeous, sweet friend, I dream ever so much of finally holding the hand of my dream girl if I ever do have one and making her feel special forever! (sigh) Yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2003-02-07 01:05 PM


Midnitesun ~

I am honored that you would like to "keep" this one. Please do--and read and enjoy it if ever you are alone on a long, cold, winter's night! tehe

May your life always be filled with the glowing lights of loving--and being loved,

EA

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11 posted 2003-02-07 01:07 PM


Lovely read. Soft, yes

Ed

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12 posted 2003-02-07 01:07 PM


Pat ~

Yes, this has been my blessed experience--I just wish the good doctor would prescribe this drug of choice on a daily basis! tehe

May all the love that you give, be returned to you tenfold!

Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (02-07-2003 01:33 PM).]

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13 posted 2003-02-07 01:09 PM


Ethel  ~

Oh, yes, indeed! I did know you'd like this one, my little passion flower!

May your flame keep on burning!

Earthy Angel

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14 posted 2003-02-07 01:11 PM


Noah  ~

Right this very moment, your dream girl is thinking the same thing about you! Wanting you and wondering where you are! Never fear my Dear One, Fate will one day bring you together!

Sending you Valentine hugs,
EA

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15 posted 2003-02-07 01:23 PM


Ed ~

Thank ya kindly! I know that you know what I was saying in my poem!...

Sending Valentine hugs,
EA


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16 posted 2003-02-07 01:24 PM


Aenimal  ~

We're both blushing!

Valentine hugs,
EA

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17 posted 2003-02-07 03:31 PM


I'll sing bass...you sing tenor...in perfect harmony....this is beautiful...it reminds me of our night together last weekend....LOL
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18 posted 2003-02-07 03:47 PM


Toe ~

Tra la la la la...

P.S. A southern gentleman shouldn't kiss and tell! tsk tsk!

Valentine hugs,
EA

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19 posted 2003-02-07 04:14 PM


whew!
Earth Angel
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20 posted 2003-02-07 04:30 PM


passing shadows  ~

"whew" was a very warm reply! Thank you!

May the love that you deserve, find you!

Warm hugs,
EA


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21 posted 2003-02-07 04:48 PM


I didn't tell a thing....call it "wishful" thinking or just an innocent "misleading"....LOL
Earth Angel
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22 posted 2003-02-07 04:53 PM


Toe, remember--"If you wish upon a star, your dreams come true"...

Have your gray skies cleared up? If so, the stars may be out tonight down there in Alabama. Look up toward Orion and make your wish...



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23 posted 2003-02-07 07:15 PM


Such a powerfully romantic piece, nice to see something like this here, good job
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24 posted 2003-02-07 07:25 PM


Very nicely done Linda..
As soft and gentle as a whisper..
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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25 posted 2003-02-07 07:51 PM


Linda - this is ever soft, but Linda, you promised me that you wouldn't tell...

BC

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26 posted 2003-02-07 09:55 PM


I am inspired to passion by this reading . . . (sigh)
Earth Angel
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27 posted 2003-02-08 11:08 AM


Peter ~

Thank you! It sounds as though you must be a romanticist yourself!

Love makes the world go 'round!

Warm hugs,
EA

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28 posted 2003-02-08 11:09 AM


Nancy ~

Thank you for the compliment! I've learned from the best!--you!

Warm hugs,
Linda

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29 posted 2003-02-08 11:12 AM


BC ~

I just had to show the world that you "walk" your poetic "talk"!--and very well at that! tehe

Valentine hugs,
EA


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30 posted 2003-02-08 11:14 AM


Robert ~

...Oh, my!

(Are you by yourself?!?)

Valentine hugs,
EA

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31 posted 2003-02-08 02:37 PM


Damn.......gotta go find my hubby now..heheeheheheh......beautifully done.
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32 posted 2003-02-08 02:55 PM


I knew I would find you somewhere within
these walls...and what a find it was!!!

Very well done Linda..

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33 posted 2003-02-08 05:16 PM


Lisann ~

...did you find him?!?  I'm sure he would have enjoyed your early Valentine's Day gift!

Warm hugs,
EA

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34 posted 2003-02-08 05:18 PM


Barry ~

Considering your phenomenal expertise at penning words to incite passion, I accept your kind words with the greatest humility--and appreciation! Thank you!

Valentine hugs,
Linda

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35 posted 2003-02-09 02:58 AM


very nice...I enjoyed this Linda
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36 posted 2003-02-09 03:44 AM


"Blushing"  Well done!
Earth Angel
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37 posted 2003-02-09 07:06 PM


passing shadows ~

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed!

Warm hugs,
EA

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38 posted 2003-02-09 07:08 PM


Jason ~

...that makes two of us! I suppose my poem exposes the earthy side of this "angel"! tehe

Valentine hugs,
Earth Angel

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