Open Poetry #24 |
I'm Not Perfect |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I'm not perfect Nor will I ever be People may think I am But I know I am not I'm not perfect I will never Claim to be Even if loved ones say I am I'm not perfect I make mistakes too I'm not perfect And never shall I ever be I'm not perfect Nobody is ever perfect So is my observation I'm not perfect Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Neither am I, Julie. When other people think we are it just puts more pressure on us. we then try to live up to their expectations. It's hard, too. Sometimes I think they may be doing "reverse psychology" on us. What do you think? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Sometimes I do agree with you garysgirl. Thanks for reading. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I think in some ways it is our imperfections that give us indivuality |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
It's hard to live in the spotlight all the time where people not only think you are perfect but EXPECT you to be perfect. And then when you mess up, what happens? Good write, you've expressed yourself well. BlueEyes |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Neither am I, and wouldn't want to be. To much to live up to! Good write. Deb |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
You are perfect for me. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
the-loner-23, no there isn't any of us prefect nice poem always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I was once called a "perfect little angel" in the second grade. Now most people just call me crazy. Though I was told once I was by a parent I was "too good." But None of us are perfect, only One Man on this earth ever lived perfection, and He took the imperfections of all humanity on His bloodstained back. You expressed yourself well here - And so it was that time stood still - |
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