Open Poetry #24 |
Lost in Memories |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Lost in memories, again. Restless midnite dreams only make the heartache pour from pores that bleed dry the very soul of me, the memory of touch, of arms that once held me tight, making love all night, even as we watched the rising sun, the one that never brightened my day as did the smile on your face. Oh, how I do miss you. Ours was a love affair written passionately on the face of the moon as it showered us with hope and certainty that this was the greatest love of all eternity. Oddly enough, it still is. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, how I do miss you... ~*~ An Affair to Remember... you made me think of that... you write so well... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
My heart cries out a thank you, for letting me bleed a little in public. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Bleed if you must but heal too |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Your writes are so heartrending...I hope that "You'll always have Paris" with the subject of your writing. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
memories are such an easy place to get lost in. Its when time is still and.. I'd go on too long if I started. This is a piece of your heart I thank you for letting me see. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"even as we watched the rising sun, the one that never brightened my day as did the smile on your face. Oh, how I do miss you." this just aches so much.... hugs for you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Raph, yes, still healing. KJ, thank you for that. GG, thanks. Yes, some nights I prefer getting lost in reverie. SEA, thank you dear friend, for the heart hugs. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I can relate to this very well. Time helps when nothing else will. Hugs, Deb |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you, Deb. Any idea just how long it might take? A lifetime, it seems. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kacy, |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Those memories are what makes it so hard to forget. It does take time to get over a lost love. And, I hope for you, it is soon. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good writing, love the thought |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
well written window into an ache of life - thanks for offering us the window - Paul |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very emotional writing, touched with the ache of love. I am keeping this... |
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