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Forever, My Valentine
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Forever, My Valentine |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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He is the moon in full........he is the tide’s gentle pull he is my strength, salvation.........he is my rock, foundation his is the touch to sooth,heal.........his is the love a fantasy, real he is ever, my dance in the rain.........my midnight whispers of, baby again his is the passion I seek to ignite..........my lover, every night he is the one who set my soul free.........he is everything good inside of me he is my heart’s favorite song...........he is where, I belong he is more than my very best friend........ my life, to eternity’s end ~SEA~  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Susan, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as you have the Valentine spirit in your heart and I know your love will deeply forever be touched by your whispers! (kiss on cheek) Yay, this is a classic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Susan! Perfectly beautiful. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Sun of faith Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 101 |
heart warming, i lovved it, great write! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
He is also my personal hero...what a lucky fella!!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Your lovesong is the envy of many who never found it possible to hold such high notes. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Jon... is smiling.... so am I. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
so what you're saying is He All Dat lol |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Wow, I gotta be brutal here. Lovely!! And I concur, a very lucky guy!! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
He is everything good inside of me... That's where 'forever' is at! It's always so nice to read you SEA~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Susan, this is so beautiful. I love it.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Thank you all so much, my husband really is all this, and more  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Yeah, I think ya like him a bit....  |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
SEA, i loved this it reminds me of my husband |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
It's nice to see you posting again, sweetie. The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sea--This love sounds true and beauitful, your poem is. |
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