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cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

0 posted 2003-02-06 05:36 PM

I look into your eyes,
And I can see that
You have read our story.
You have seen it all
Before it was ever written-
And it has yet to be completely
Written.
I listen to the soft tones
Of your voice,
And I realize that
You know every note
To our life song.
You knew every note
Before it was ever sung.
And it is now being
Sung…
Your touch shows
That you already know
Every curve of my body;
The cinnamon silk
Of my skin.
Within your hands lie
The memory of my touch,
Sweet to your fingertips
Long before I was born.
And many times,
I have been born…
Your sweet kiss wraps me
Up inside, and tells me
That you have all the secrets
Of our souls within…
All the secrets of lives past,
All the secrets we will create
Together…
I close my eyes in the
Incredible bliss of your lips,
And I move gracefully to
The moonlit whispers
Emanating from the depths
Of the Universe…
And all this you know.
All this I can taste
Within your Love.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-06 05:36 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-02-06 05:49 PM

oh wow! Stunningly beautiful and pulled me into it (which is hard to do with a love poem)!
You created feelings and a picture, very well written.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-02-06 06:01 PM

This is a very beautiful love poem. I really
enjoyed reading it....

Sun of faith
Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 101

4 posted 2003-02-06 07:16 PM

Amazing write, very very beautiful, thank you.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-02-06 07:23 PM

Beautiful.
Eric

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2003-02-06 07:35 PM

cinnamongirl - whew, warm it is, but very soft...

BC

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2003-02-06 07:36 PM

Noah - another sweetheart of a write...

BC

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-02-06 07:37 PM

Very very nicely done!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

9 posted 2003-02-06 07:40 PM

Well, my goodness, Cinnamongirl, you are on a roll. This is the third terrific poem I've read of yours.

Very nice and soft and romantic.

Enjoying your writing greatly.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

10 posted 2003-02-06 07:44 PM

Beautifully written...

believe in what your heart feels...

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

11 posted 2003-02-07 12:32 PM

Nice words loved it

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

12 posted 2003-02-08 12:46 PM

cinnamongirl~
What a lovely write this is.
Beautifully done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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