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In The Wrap Of Depression
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In The Wrap Of Depression |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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She is wrapped in cold grey again and lonliness grasps a spirit with a cruel hand. She sinks with a calm acceptance sliding fingernails down a wet unforgiving wall of hopelessness hoping to find comfort even in the screaming silence of dispair. At least there at the bottom the floor will not give way beneath her. Somewhere in a verticle distance she is curled around stone fingers glazed in blood from holding on tight enough to brace herself for the tear storms that ravage her hope leave her empty dry and her wrecked red eyes dare not open again to reveal the stench of dead passion inside. ~~I Love You~~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You share so much of yourself, here. I always love to find and read what you have to say. |
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Laney Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 85Illinois |
A brillant piece of work!! A raw look inside your emotions. I loved it!! --Alana |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Such a raw, powerful write and as always I find pieces of myself in your words. Each case is it's own type of hell and it's seems almost a mockery for me to say that I relate, but, I do and once again you have touched me, if painfully so. This is a keeper~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gawd I love the way you write! So open and honest...wonderful Jen. ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh my, this is potent. I wish I could gift you something to make the pain go away. How about a cyber smile?  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you speak of it well...I have been there |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
"Somewhere in a verticle distance she is curled around stone fingers glazed in blood from holding on tight enough to brace herself for the tear storms that ravage her hope leave her empty dry and her wrecked red eyes dare not open again" wow. just, wow. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggssssssss) Oh Jennifer, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I understand these blood-shot portrayings and I wish for angel tears of healing like Visine to come and take this red out! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we are all here for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Awake again, and know that always beyond the storm, is the sun. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
like your style, can relate, guts and heart , unafraid |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Heaped on the floor prevents a leap. This was a very good description of despair. Sorry you were compelled to do it and hope it's release finds you a bit better. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Temptress - if this is about you, I'm sorry for what you're going through. I wish you the very best... BC |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
sliding fingernails down a wet unforgiving wall of hopelessness Sheer brilliance! If I lived a thousand life times I could never write such a line. I love your work. raph |
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