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maninthebox New Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 1 |
came around I spun too much I fell down as it passed spinning by very fast shift and change with my eyes as picture frames stopping when I took the fall slowing down I started crawl stopping from my spin too fast coming back to the reel world at last at last [This message has been edited by maninthebox (12-19-2002 11:05 PM).] |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
WHoa! Now this was Dizzy!!!! You can edit that first part that didn't center....although it does kind of add to the dizziness.  Welcome among the Bold and italics ...Passions with a smile ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
WEll I just now saw where this was originally posted and now I have.... the rest of the story. Just wanted to tell you I reread it and I like the way you put reel in for real. Don't know if you realized it, but it works well. Also i really like that name of yours maninthebox....TOO COOL ~Salty |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I see the apple doesn't fall far....! That's one family with an abundance of talent....excellent!  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It is indeed a great honor for me to welcome you to Passions in Poetry. I feel as if I know you already. I hope you continue to write - your first entry here is excellent. I have a feeling you'll be an asset to our home in no time. It's also my pleasure to tell you to check your email for a special greeting.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I know you will love it here. I much enjoyed your first post.. and I'll be looking for more of your work. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile... Welcome, maninthebox. I too, loved the reel vs. real choice that you made here. Are you by any chance interested in filmmaking? grin? (okay, I'l shaddup, blew yer cover already anyhow. SO PROUD of you...eyes as picture frames..yanno I loved that--even if it does scare me a bit.)   and hey, did I ONCE lick a hankie to clean your face? NEVER!!! (gawd I love this poet) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You had me spinning and twirling in this. Welcome!   |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep, good write. Welcome to Passions! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Every now and then you just have to let yourself spin and blend the colors and see what you get! (smiles) This is a gorgeous and vibrant debut, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes...I see the talent runs in the family.. should I talk to you like I do your Mom and infuriate you with goads to write what's deep inside? Or should you and I gang up on her and make life interesting for her by tag teaming? Welcome to the blue... hope to see more of your words here. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
maninthebox Welcome and enjoyed your post. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, MITB...it's going to be a pleasure watching your poetry in motion... Please! Check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I've had bar-room departures like this....liked the write...good original poem.... |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
shamanic spin-art dizzy reel too real picture-eyed cameradance the world is your paint the word is your brush keep the music coming, Maninthebox |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I enjoyed this very much... Welcome to Passions! *S* |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
gonna ditto suthern.....*grin* she loves it when I do..... no really welcome, from your aunt Karon...oh, you didn't know your mom had another sister with the same name? lol Love your mom and enjoy her poetry, will watch for more from you as well  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
maninthebox~ (cool name )I really enjoyed this poem. Reminds me a bit of one that I wrote awhile back. It's clear that you have a natural talent for writing and I'll definitely be looking for more from you. Welcome to Passions! ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
from a new member to another, here is my advice to you: don't be too honest around these pages. welcome. -chris. [This message has been edited by christian (12-20-2002 02:10 PM).] |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
man in the box, loved your first post, though it made me a bit more dizzy than I usually am.  Welcome to Passions! The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 A word of advice from an oldtimer to a newcomer; listen to your mom. She is a very, very smart lady and knows how things spin in this place. |
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